man what an awesome story, i will keep following this

good story, keep it up

Im seriously enjoying the story so far, hope you update again soon

*SPOILER ALERT*
Cloaking tech and antimatter mines, considering naval tactics that would be lethal, on the other hand the space marines being smart and setting a trap to lure them out is also factual.
Now i must say that, in all honesty for the next chapter, space marines are lethal in close quarters, they should in the very least, keep up with the protoss. Of course whatever you chose, you cant please all the nurglite neckbeards, hence why im trying to provide you this info.
Brother Scout sergeant Böv.

I liked the chapter!

I have question author is the mc have chaos taint or he will be just independent player in warhammer?

is this still updating or have you moved on to the other stories on your profile?

this story has a very interesting premise, I hope that you continue to update this till its completion.

Now, upon gazing on the tapestry that is fate, i can see a possible route you may take. You must avoid this route or this good story will suffer. you must decide, how high is a k/d ratio between an average spacemarines and an average protoss. it cannot be 0 but more than 2 may be too high in my opinion. A tip for the future you must heed.

Awesome

Awesome fanfic...hype for next chapter

finally good fanfiction with protoss

Awesome

I hate chaos,imperial,elders and dark elders
I only like the necrons.

OH YES SCREW TZEECH, BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD