| Reviews for naruto phenex-a untravelled path |
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   heirtobooks chapter 6 . 10/21 need a beta, my grammer sucks |
| Xenozip chapter 6 . 10/21 Holy shit the grammar in this chapter is the worst yet, I couldn't even understand what the hell I'm supposed to be reading half the time. |
| yama-sama chapter 6 . 10/21 it even looks like the beginning of a completely different story. |
| Mr. Haze chapter 5 . 10/19 Ain’t gonna lie, I’m hella confused. But I’ll continue reading |
| lilhuesos chapter 1 . 10/8 ...WTF...I do not understand how the most powerful beings in the Universe, Great red and Ophis are the 2 ... It's okay if you put the trimurti First ... And then you put that above them were the 3 most powerful beings (Great red, ophis , 666-Thiexia), Tuner Gods of 3 ... I don't know man, it seems very forced to me, There is also the fact that you forget the Nordic Gods, Egyptians Ect. Yasaka from 7 WTF? this if it is forced to 100% like the others; the eighth and the last. If she had any chance of reading this story, This has killed her ... |
| Bloody kitsune264 chapter 3 . 10/8 You are killing yourself here... You first said sasuke in ch1 and here Sayuri... Get your story checked |
| Bloody kitsune264 chapter 1 . 10/8 How are ophis and great red 2nd |
| Dasgun chapter 6 . 10/8 . . |
| lapiva.elduro chapter 5 . 8/1 hola heirtobooks, esta esperando con mucho entusiasmos tu fanfic. amigo es de la mejor calidad este fic, no lo dejes de subir porfavor, que ya,me ise adicto a esta historia xd. eres el mejor de lo mejor. |
| IWolfAssassin chapter 5 . 7/31 This is a Pretty Cool story Dynamic I have not seen yet |
| sparda191 chapter 1 . 7/20 Why are ophis and great red not the strongest. In the series the only one abke to fight against them was trihexa. Just curious for the deviation, stories seems interesting otherwise. |
| A10riddick chapter 5 . 7/16 Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/13 story is so laggy |
| Corpse Candle chapter 4 . 7/14 Given she was called the seraph of healing you could give her Sephiroth Graal with its resurrection being one of it’s ability she could try and resurrect Naruto and when it fails she would get frustrated or realise he is alive Given it can talk to her probably Canis Lykaon he would give her something to fight beside he has the ability to produce blades from his body, he can transform into a sword itself and it can attack through shadows |
| Corpse Candle chapter 1 . 7/13 Well the story has some potential I just find the constant point of view changes annoying just tell the story without POV’s and it would probably be a vast improvement in my opinion that’s just my thought on it I will probably still read this story given it is interesting though it seems familiar like I have read it before |
