Reviews for Dust and Echoes
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12
That is awesome.
Guest chapter 10 . 9/12
What will the reaction of people of remnant see the Spartans?
Guest chapter 10 . 9/2
Will someone in remnant take control ONI like Ozpin take control everything and know what is best or not if meaning going really dark.
chidoriprime chapter 10 . 9/3
Sounds like Hazel and Haki must have sabotaged the sensor tower.

Nice to see a more balanced UNSC in a fanfic; while Johnson and the Marines/Army were putting up a good fight, it's clear that without the Huntsmen and later Scorpion reinforcements, they would have been overrun by sheer numbers and the more elite Grimm forms.

And now we get to see just how much stronger Remnantians are to their Earthborn cousins.

Poor Hannibal is so suprised by Aura and Semblances that he was literally shorting out trying to process the seemingly impossible.

Halsey's reaction was hard to read (is it guilt, or worry that her Spartans will be dismissed?), but I don't blame either her or Cole for feeling hopeful... or planning on how Remnant can help turn the tide.

And here comes Red Team vs. Alpha Grimm! Place your bets folks, this ones gonna be a dozy! I hope Ozpin gets to see what Spartans can do :)
Vist-97 chapter 10 . 8/30
To shados960
I agree about balance between remnants and UNSC it was getting very annoying how everyone making OP. Also my answer about your suggestion, no I don’t want Hybrid between spartan and remnants along with how I would hate to see the ONI kidnapping kid in remnants because the of remnants will find out quick and I don’t want team RWBY or JNPR being part of the spartan program.
scottusa1 chapter 10 . 8/30
Good chapter. Keep it up. Laters.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/30
Man can't wait for next chapter but is Spartan 2 is going be out class by huntsman or Spartan 2 out class the huntsman but it your story and who ever out class who I'm fine with it.
SenorGorilla chapter 10 . 8/30
Welp that was a weekends worth of binge reading this story and I've gotta say this one of the most well written story I have ever read on this site. Hats off to you, so far I have no complaints here ,but I've wondered a couple of things, will you introduce the other Spartan generations? And will the Humans and Faunus be part of other programs of the such? I mean you might've hinted to it with the Artemis armour. Sorry if I asked to many questions this story is awesome can't wait for the next chapter.
kpmh2001 chapter 10 . 8/30
Gotta love how Johnson and the rest of the Marines don't ask questions and just immediately stand up and fight the Grimm, even in spite of their apparent lack of capabilities when compared to the Huntsmen and Huntresses of Remnant. I agree with Late Night Gaming, Halo's Marines are beautiful.

Poor doctor Halsey is probably thinking A LOT about all of the things she did to make the Spartans strong as she watches the Huntsmen work, hopefully the Spartans will get their chance to show their stuff as well.
shados960 chapter 10 . 8/30
This is already proving to be an excellent crossover the way you’ve balanced and scaled halo and RWBY is great and refreshing since these type of crossovers always makes the UNSC overpowered gods that can’t be beaten by the opposing or working parties so glad you’ve made them have an advantage over remnant but at the same time give the same to remnant to make them comparable.

But this chapter showed in the first part of the Grimm battle how the Huntsmen fight Grimm while also introducing the ODST’s but what really stole the show was how you introduced semblances and aura to Halsey,Hannibal and cole who’s reaction were hilarious as Hannibal literally was glitching out from being unable to comprehend the impossible was so funny to read though it also brought something that concerned me is that Ozpin noticed calculation in coles expression meaning he has plans to weaponize or integrate this into the UNSC to fight against the covenant which worries me as we’ve seen the lengths the UNSC and ONI have gone through to create the Spartans and I fear they’ll do something similar. Though it seems halo humans are unable to gain access to aura being unlocked most likely due to the brother gods magic only working on humans of remnant though I wonder if the UNSC will try to find a loophole for this.

Though I do have a suggestion that the UNSC/ONI begin a joint collaboration project with remnant to create remnant Spartans that combine both the huntsman’s capabilities with aura and semblance with the spartan upgrades acting as a face of protection and strength against threats of vale with teams RWBY and JNRP being volunteered for the program and after their training/augmentation by master chief enter beacon and test their capabilities as huntsman/Spartan hybrids I think it would be a cool idea and a chance for for remnant and the UNSC to collaborate together for a project that benefits both sides and honestly I think they’ll need this for when the covenant arrive.

So great chapter and I can’t wait to see the remnant leaders react to seeing master chief in action.
LiquidusSnake chapter 10 . 8/30
Yeah, this is just the best halo/rwby crossover i ever read, everyone is in character and the power scaling seem right to both sides and the first contact scenario was well executed and plausible compared to other stories were is rushed and/or hamfisted, i too am curious what will you do with Sienna Khan, maybe the arrival of the UNSC will prevent the white fang from going retard.
Sorry for the long rant its my first review to this story and i just wanted to say this fic is fucking awesome and i will wait (im)patiently for the next entry. Keep going and stay Safe! ;-)
thetyrant67 chapter 10 . 8/30
Curses! A cliffhanger! But this chapter was certainly worth the wait. The eventual talk about the Covenant though... oof.
Evinco chapter 10 . 8/30
I still see team RWBY go into situations that effect parts of the UNSC because of their proactive approach to go after crime or the white fang. Something that Ozpin or the current white fang representative will have to answer for.
The crimson trucker chapter 10 . 8/30
I love the story so far, I just wanted to know if there would be outlandish weapons like the gauss scythe... wait I just remembered ruby is a weapon nut... Johnson! don't let ruby into the Armory!
The-Killer40513 chapter 10 . 8/29
I wonder how the SDC will try to deal with the UNSC since I'm pretty sure you'll make it so that they won't like slavery, though I think ONI might not mind. There's also the fact that in the grand scheme of things Remant is pretty small campared to the rest of the galaxy, like yeah it's interesting, but it's still only a single planet. Here's another thing; their population aren't able to get any of the resources to challenge any intergalactic civilization because of the Grimm, so please don't make the planet overpowered you just basically confirmed that as of now only one kingdom has a standing military that isn't very popular. Not only that; they also rely on Dust for pretty much everything, which in my opinion is the one of the main reasons as to why they hadn't gone to space yet. They don't stand a chance against the UNSC or the Covenant.
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