hope to read more.

Please update soon

This could be a good story

not a bad story but your chapters are way too short and don't really do much as they're way too short so you don't put much information in them just brief glimpes of what the crew is doing. It's basically you just saying "Luffy beat Buggy, Naruto joined his crew and they left the island. The end"

it's absolutely fucking retarded to put up an authors note just to say that your chapter is delayed the only time you should do that is if it's going to be an extremely long period of time or you're completely dropping the story

You have a hood structure so far but remember to pace yourself if you move the story along too quickly you miss out on the more important factors and some scenes might not be as impactful as a result just take things bit by bit

Chapters 1 through four Seem to be more of you talking about a Summary then telling a story.

Cool chapter continue please.

excellent work on this chapter

Awesome chapter keep it up

Cool 2 chapters continue please.

Actually, Minato does know Sage Mode. He just uses it differently.

also can't wait for future chapters, like seeing robin and WG-marine reaction about naruto having far more destructrive power than the most dangerous ancient weapon (with all so6p and jinchuriki skills, a full powered naruto has likely enough power to destroy entire countries and even moon sized target in few minutes)

excellent work on this chapter :)

this could work let's see where this goes