| Reviews for The Night Rider |
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   Dragoncyber22 chapter 4 . 8/30 You have a date in your mind to go back to writing. I may very much want to read your story until it is completed. |
| DallGod115 chapter 4 . 7/14 nice next please |
| kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 4 . 6/6 Awesome |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/8 Really don't like this story. I tried but I can't. the grammar is terrible, Its a harem like every other trash fic but of course you declare issei harem free game. You do know that there are a bunch of other girls to have Naruto be with, it doesn't always have to be with Issei harem more specifically Rias which for some reason people like to pair Naruto with her even though she's terrible and Naruto deserves someone way stronger |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/7 There are grammar errors and it’s kinda messing up this story, the story is good but the grammar is not the best |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/7 It’s cool but there are a bit of grammar Problems in this but overall it’s good |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/3 Did Mephisto get anything from claiming Naruto’s Soul!? I thought that Asura’s Chakra was tied to Naruto’s soul!? How did Naruto eventually end up in the DxD Universe!? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/3 This is an okay chapter, but do you have a beta reader? This needs a beta reader. There are grammatical errors, mistakes in word usage, and more. Chapters that have errors in Grammer, spelling, sentence construction or any error, then this will take away from the story. You want your reader to be invested in your story. Have these errors makes it difficult for the reader to not only read it be to be invested in it. For the harem, I would recommend Xenovia, Akeno, and probably Yasaka. I hope you find this advice useful for future stories. |
| No Name chapter 4 . 5/3 another story where the author chooses to ntr Issei by declaring his harem free game? Dxd is not in shortage of girls but still and always Issei's harem ?! congratulations author I congratulate you on your brilliant imagination, like thousands of stories here, you still choose his harem? gentlemen at your keyboards make a list of all the girls you see in the harem! is it a market or a pokemon hunt? are you unable to choose yourself? Naruto-centric again! like billions of Naruto x Dxd, it's brilliant of creativity the author still chooses to make Naruto the mc? trash fic. no creativity or inventiveness, Issei is still ntr |
| chuck jr chapter 4 . 5/3 What is original, you lost me at returning the sacred rings. |
| PkmntrainerCam chapter 4 . 5/3 Rating Game* but good chapter overall. |
| Aaron Leach chapter 4 . 5/3 Awesome chapter. |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 4 . 5/3 Excellent update |
| chisa782911 chapter 4 . 5/3 NaruAkeno please |
| SPark681 chapter 4 . 5/3 Hmm, so wonder how Naruto will stop the wedding and if Laeticia will awaken her past self anyways keep up the great work! |
