This was alright. I feel it would have been improved with more actual sexual context though. This felt a bit predatory and had some groping, but didn't quite cross into the arousal territory.

And that kind of arousal is necessary for horror-erotica. We should be both aroused and disgusted/horrified.

Well written

An interesting method of horror. I can dig it.

Another great sexy and scary story.

P.S. Do you know Miyuki-Chan in Wonderland/Mirrorland ?
I would love to see the Tenchi's girls finding themselves in place.

Indeed, you did an erotic horror fanfic where Kiyone and Mihoshi were eventually caught by the newest goddess who plays with human lives, and the worst is that this story has been repeated over and over, having captured different Kiyones and Mihoshis from different universes.

And since neither has escaped, we see that they will be no exception to this rule.