Reviews for A Promise Between Worlds
Wolfking554 chapter 14 . 7/15
hey i wan to ask is that okay? is it possible for two character i love to be in this fic

they are natsu dragneel from fairy tail and haru gory from rave master

if you don't know about rave master then read it i personally recommended it. no joke try it

can they also be on the team with emma?
zack24 chapter 13 . 7/10
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zack24 chapter 14 . 7/10
I wonder if there will be a blazblue character?
DedeTC chapter 14 . 7/10
smashing to see you back and with a updated chapter no less.

glad to see emma and her crossover friends again after so long, now they're witnessing some other competitors. mind you that last one, The EVA seem like he would be overkill ,then again there are those who can take on giant robots or might cheat and fight the pilot too.

guess I just want to see Emma makes some more new friends, but I can tell some people are getting nervous or even fear that having more than one character in this story would cluster the tale, maybe if they were in one group yeah, but who knows, you being the fabulous and creative author might give different perspectives of each group if it comes to that (oh wait you have in a way)

still anyway, I can't wait for more and would love to see Emma make more friends
Lord of the weed chapter 14 . 7/9
That was an interesting chapter. I have a feeling things aren't as peaceful and orderly as they appear to be. It's likely that all sorts of underhanded tactics will be used during this intermission like poisoning the food and water supply or participants with hypnotic, illusionary or mind control powers will try to make the others break the rules in order to disqualify the competition. Not to mention all the spying and stealing of other people's items that's probably going on. I could wrong though and the coming chapters will be mostly socializing. Curious to find out. Looking forward to the next update.
Maxim7 chapter 14 . 7/9
Lol Shinji got his EVA, that is crazy and kind of unfair. I wonder if there are other mecha users in the competition? Did the loud noise from several chapters ago come from the EVA?

Kinda suprised that the video does not show people with crazy destructive powers like Gatsuga Tenshou or kamehameha. Best Kouhai as staff member, do not tell me Cheldea is behind this whole competition?
1020 chapter 13 . 6/27
It's been a little while now, so glad I picked this up again! What a good conclusion to the first arc! The pacing is really great (big fan of long/slow-burn fics, though it's not for everyone). I don't know a lot about Saint Seiya (My knowledge of shonen/battle anime is a spottier than I thought); but he seems fun, I hope we see him again! And I see that Garou is becoming attached against his will... He cannot defeat Emma's sincerity... it's too strong!
I was a little nervous that this mega-crossover would become too cluttered with all these distinct characters running about... But! You've exceeded all my expectations once again by choosing to stick with our little rag-tag team, thick and thin. I can't summarize it well, but having Emma be the central protagonist really grounds the story. With so much going on and so much material to work with, it's easy to get lost. I wonder what the next arc will be? Ahh, I can't wait!
Anyway, sorry, I'll cut my thoughts short here for now, thank you again for the chapters!
(1020, if my name didn't change yet;; )
DedeTC chapter 13 . 6/15
an end to a fantastic arc. very good indeed

I would love to see emma and friends mingle with other characters, like how in anime the group expands a little. like meet shirou & saber, Sakura & Aladdin, maybe Ruby & Izuku midoriya possibly.

and/or maybe giver us a glimpse of the other competitors see any formed a alliances too.

although I would like to see the lot chatting, discussing, socialising that sort of thing, either way amazing work and I hope the next one has that excitement (as long as some stuff doesn't drag a little like that undead ape battle) keep going and good luck.
Lord of the weed chapter 13 . 6/12
And that wraps the preliminary up nicely, good chapter. They barely made it though, luck was on their side this time around thanks to Seiya's timely intervention. Hopefully their health and stamina gets restored or they find someone willing to heal Garou. Curious where you will take things from here on out. I hope they can remain a team for now, perhaps as a requirement in the next round and maybe another one joins or gets assigned to them. If so, a swordsman like Ichigo (Bleach) or Akame (Akame ga Kill) would be a good addition. With Garou, Gon and Killua hand to hand combat is covered enough, I think. Till next time!
Maxim7 chapter 13 . 6/12
Thanks for finishing preliminary arc, I enjoyed reading this fic. Similiarity between Emma and Garou? I could only see it in ther persistence on getting what they what, while Garou is Tsundere, Emma has more open personality.

Garou being Garou really could not resist challanging Heroic character, even when he is in bad condition. Seiya leaving the group might be a better choice or a lot of infighting might happen.

One more thing, if you want more people to help improving your writting, you should try to post this fic in spacebattle forum in creative writting section. The people there might be able to give critical opinion, both in your grammar or storyline.
Maxim7 chapter 12 . 6/5
Welp here comes Seiya, a tough reinforcement indeed though I feel Sakura and Aladdin would suit the current group dynamic better, well especially Sakura because I feel Emma needs some female friends..

Been a while since I last saw Saint Seiya, how strong are the people in that franchise again? I think I remember something about people doing light speed attack but that is about it. If it is true would not he a bit too strong compared with Emma's group?
Dasgun chapter 12 . 6/4
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Lord of the weed chapter 11 . 5/23
Nice update. Emma handled herself very well in that encounter with the zombie ape and slowly but surely Garou is starting to evolve. Didn't expect the Nevermore to give our heroes as much trouble as it did though in the latest chapters, given how team RWBY dealt with one of those in the beginning of the series and I think Killua and Gon individually are stronger than all four of them put together at that time. Lastly, as exciting as it is seeing them deal with the monsters of the valley it would be cool to have the group finally run into a genuinely hostile competitor for a change. Keep up the good work!
Maxim7 chapter 11 . 5/23
Finally they got enough medals to pass this round and Garou with Nen. What type of Nen he will specialize I wonder, if it is the same as Gon he will be a complete monster of brute force.

Heh, beat one Ape and a dozen more appears, they should get people with high luck to join them next time. Well they could just use the escape skill, but there is some kind of missing plot from several chapters ago where Garou and Gon heard some kind of loud noise far from them. Is it for future plot and not for current arc?

Also I did not read Baki, but I did not expect the monster to be the same one from that series, I thought it is just merely the same species. Poor Ape, at least his last opponents in this story are not jerk like the one who killed him.

From your note are you planning to finish this arc with several future releases before putting this story to rest so you could go back to your other stories?
Maxim7 chapter 10 . 4/27
Did not expect you to separate them like this on final day, I thought they will finish getting every stars by this chapter. I wonder if I should call them unlucky or lucky because at least it is just a Nevermore not a dragon Grimm.

Some readers might think the pace of the story a bit too slow though. From what I heard some people are a bit put off when there are too many words when the fic only has a few chapters.

You also mistyped "diglett" as "duglett", might want to double-check the grammar when you have time.

Thanks for the chapter anyway. Good luck for your exam.
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