Ha fuck Midas. Agnes should kill his apparently ridiculously stupid ass.

What? Was class 6 minutes long or something? The fuck kinda class is that?

That makes literally no sense. None at all. It’s not in any way realistic that he would let her go.

Holy shit a update

Yeah, if I’m being honest Midas seems a bit underpowered for a 3.5 level 20 so I don’t even understand the OP complaints

Man, I’m reading Wizard’s Soul as well, and now I know why 3.5 was called of DnD.

"...were two wooden crates and two large sealed clay pots placed so that each was laying as far from the others as possible."

This is an incorrect usage of the word 'laying'. The correct word to use in this instance is 'lying'.

www . /page/laying-vs-lying

The elf's sword should have 'hung' from his belt rather 'hang'.

Hopefully he can appreciate the strength of that thing in the sky after figuring it out a bit more, or just knowing how it's completely non magical in nature. Just read this whole fic, great story so far, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Who else when they saw someone scream "DRAGON." read it in the voice of a Skyrim character?

While it is true he is overpowered the fact that he is a automaton sort of makes up for it. I don't know why but when you read a story about a overpowered DnD character, it always feels like a cringey self insert. Like this is my character Lord Reverend, he is a half elf, half dragon, half demon, level 20 sorcerer. When he was a child he killed Asmodeus and now controls the forces of the nine hells. Also he can cast 10th level magic, and is immortal, and his dick is 18 inches long.

Okay so I got a little carried away with my example, and sort of made a ridiculous exaggeration. Still back to my original point, because it is an automaton is doesn't feel like a self insert. Because well obviously no body would actually want to be a metal man, even in a fantasy. So because it cannot be an insert it instead feels comedic. He is an overpowered robot man, and that is very funny.

I love this book a whole lot!

Ya it didn’t seem a bit forced.

LIKE you wrote wrote: "So, what use is that to me other than bragging rights? Which I imagine you would be opposed to, right?"

That seemed out of character as he is too self absorbed to notice or admit that. The rest seems ok in that interaction. Other parts seemed a bit forced here and there but it can be passed as others being too unfamiliar with the MC or his nature a skill an automata.

I hope the event starts don’t fall follow the original. SO far it has been a Goodman story.

It’s makes sense to stay with english titles. If anything French would fit more than Japanese.

For anyone reading this review.

I have read the first 2 chapters so far and it is a very well written story. I recommend giving it a shot. It isn’t like most familiar of zero crossovers where the person becomes Louise's familiar and almost the same events happen.

As of chapter 2 the story takes a different direction.

I recommend reading till the end of chapter 2 before deciding to keep reading or dropping this story.