| Reviews for Let's do It Right This Time |
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Entropy the Eternal Destroyer chapter 27 . 7/22 Amazing story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Asphodel chapter 27 . 7/21 I love you Lord shadowz, Simply amazing... I love time travel fics. And this one is definitely in my top 10. And I must say I love the way you have written the story. I always enjoy a good read. Keep updating. |
The Aberrant One chapter 27 . 7/17 Daaamn. Okay, first off, while I don't like the idea of "character bashing" for the sake of just hating the character, I do like "character bashing" when there's a plot and am explanation for it. This fic if yours definitely falls on the latter category, especially with the plot twist you've thrown in. So...now I'm going to say those three words that you're probably going to hate... (Insert evil laugh here) What...Happens...Next? |
Guest chapter 27 . 7/16 This is wonderful, and extremely entertaining to read! This is super creative, and there is actually logic in the story, unlike many other AUs. Great job! |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/14 I don't know why you think your readers are longing to read about hogwarts. Why would we? It's the most boring, inadequate, dangerous school ever. |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/14 I can never understand why harry repeats his time at hogwarts when he goes back in time - how boring must that be for an adult who has already passed Newts? Why not have 'tutoring at home' and take his exams early or go to a school in america for a different experience, after all he's killing off 'harry potter'? |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/14 I think Marcus Aurelius is the coolest name ever: hail Aurelius Gaunt! |
Accio Allsorts chapter 27 . 7/13 Noooo, I need more! Also, Dray? |
Accio Allsorts chapter 10 . 7/13 Damn, that's gonna be awkward. |
Accio Allsorts chapter 2 . 7/13 I love how you wrote 'the Black market'. Makes it look like the Black family started it, which is something I can easily imagine them doing. |
Accio Allsorts chapter 1 . 7/13 I am sold. Haven't even read the first chapter yet, but I don't care. This is gold for me - and interesting that for once, Harry doesn't pass himself off as a Black. |
ImUpToNoGood chapter 9 . 7/12 Fun so far. “ with all but the last [password] being in parcelmouth” Ummm,... a parcelmouth is someone who can talk to packages. A parselmouth can’t talk to snakes, and the language is parseltongue. I also expect Aurelius’ day was fulfilling, not “for filling”. Thanks for writing! |
armysugakookie chapter 27 . 7/11 this is very interesting! love ur writing! hope u continues soon! |
armysugakookie chapter 16 . 7/11 1. i think dumbs forced fawks to bond to him 2. why didn't dumbs use legitimacy in harry? |
Sunrayz chapter 27 . 7/10 bet you a fiver draco's dead in the morning bruh. really enjoying the story so far, it's been great fun reading through this. oh yeah, chapter 27 is actually chapter 26, might wanna get that checked out, probably just a typo. cool fic bruh, really enjoy it! |