Ah man, I was looking forward to seeing how Caulifa would react to Blonde Lunch shooting everyone. Oh well. So she'd rather travel by cloud with Goku ehhh?

Glad Caulifila is scared of Blonde, it might be too much for her too not be intimidated at this point. And she has some training.

Nice Kitty indeed! And Goku's trickster monkey bit is showing.

She's adorable fangirling over the magical hand lasers. She even forgot about dinner, you know its serious when a Saiyan forget about food. Still Roshi had a piunt calling her out. Eh, great to see her acting like a kid like that.

And the two share a night under te stars, while the others share fast track sallies as someone once called them.

You continue to impress.

Please update

Looks like Caulifila's family taught her to be wary of the pervert. Very good for them.

I was thinking she would help Goku demolish Roshi's fridge, instead she catches a massive fish for it. Sashimi anyone? Quite the first impression.

You know you had me worried there'd be no Lunch. That our new female co-lead would not allow it.

Poor Krillin, er Kuririn. Though maybe having two rivals will push him harder?

Almost as clueless as Goku? Well that could describe Blue. And Yellow almost as bad as Vegeta? Now I find myself contemplating an AU funny fic with each Launch being the mother of Goku and Vegeta seperately; Goku takes it well, Vegeta less so.

Hmm? An explanation for Lunch? Interesting.

Well done on this chapter.

Hey! Loving the story so far I caught up in 2 sittings! I like what your doing with the characters here and everything about the story and it has so much potential! I hope your well and able to keep updating after your break! Enjoy yourself and great fic so far! :)

Please new update

Well this was a grand find.

I have on again off again been looking for some good fics of Caulifa interacting with universe 7. There was some success, but this blows it out of the water. Direct hit with something i didn't realize I was craving.

Her sneaking into the house eased my early worries of possible OPness. I could just picture her scooting all cartoonishly probably 'hiding' with bits of her sticking out. And then pouting when no one is at home.

And you kept the ball rolling with her failure at hiding and their pointless little fight.

And Goku being Goku after the fight is over was just going to leave.

Yet again you crush my worries with her not seeming to be from universe 6 or knowing anything more than Goku of the Saiyans. And she does seem like a kid; better mannered than Goku but still prone to outbursts and whatnot when worked up or surprised.

Surprised at Goku learning the truth so early of Oozaru. I was sad to see her tail go, but that was very Goku thing to do, so no complaints.

Now to the tiny house, on the tiny island, and epic training within!

Again, thanks for this.

Great chapter, loved the memory return scenes!

Though Chi-Chi going full yandere is kinda weird, lol.

They have at lest one set of armor but did Caulifla have a set of her own so they can both use them during the great ape training to keep there modesty? To bad they do not know that there ships can project a ball simulating the moon for there training. At lest they should contact Bulma to retrieve the ships for safe keeping.

To Sylvansis Ollivander(review for Chp15 and uploaded on 03/5)

You review is totally irrelevant to this story.

To Guest that reviewed Chp12 and uploaded on 11/3, it’s Android 16, not 15

This was great I got to catch up to 2 chapters

Nice! TFS Abridged for life!

dude chills when I finished reading his backstory. I already knew I but the way he's finding out is so cool and original great job

sooo is this a time skip?

If your going to make an embarrassment out of your story with garbage like abridged then atleast have the courtesy to make it a separate story.