Reviews for A Perfect Violation
Amber chapter 3 . 6/17/2007
This was somewhat like the movie, but with a girl and no phonebooth. It was good, I liked it. Blood.
InsanitysCandy chapter 3 . 1/2/2007
great story i really enjoyed it
CSI3Snickers chapter 3 . 7/21/2006
O...M...G. I know, this is late, but it's fault, okay? LOL

This was so freakin' perfect! Well, first, that Kiefer elevator sex was just...*fans self*

And then the ending was just phenomenal. Amazing. So in character.

I'd give you so much love if you write a fic for Desert Saints! ;)
deadlymistress24 chapter 3 . 2/23/2006
that was excellent! i too am a huge kiefer fan, and reading this sent chills down my arms. i love kiefer's coldness and although i shouldn't say this (or maybe i should since she kinda was a bitca)im really glad tricia died. she deserved it. lol. again, great story. evil plot bunny strikes again! toodlez. :)
morph chapter 3 . 7/19/2005
I liked this fic. It was really good. The ending was good too. Not everyone can get way like Stu did. Keep up the great work! :)
j752572 chapter 3 . 12/21/2004
I think it was great! I really liked it and now i really want to write a PB fic thats been brewing in my head for a while.. lol ofcorse ive got one fic i need to work on an anohter one...in the oven as it were... lol
Jen too lazy to sign in haha chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
Wow, I've never read anything that you've written before besides your Blue Fic (and I was very, very confused), but this is freaking awesome! I love your writing style- its interesting to read and clever. You give a good image of the characters without over doing it. Bravo! :D

I don't know how Ms. T would react to fucking in the elevator. Lol, I wanna see how you turn this into your one act, k?

-J
Trinn chapter 3 . 10/25/2004
Good story! *claps* Most realistic take on a Phonebooth sequel I've read so far. Fabulously written. _
Grunge Sponge chapter 3 . 9/9/2004
I LOVE THIS STORY!
MidCircleNine chapter 3 . 6/28/2004
Woah... Excellent. Phone Booth was a cool movie, despite the fact that the only time we got to see Keifer was blurred... Oh well... I like his voice, and there was alot of that. Anyway, I really thought it was cool, a brilliant idea, seeing as how he got off scot free th' first, I guess it was th' first, time.

And Young Guns rocks. Doc's my favorite character, A, it's Keifer, B, Snipers are cool, and C, he's one of the quickest to come up with a sarcastic response. Flatliners, 24... Keifer's a good actor, ay?
Cerrita chapter 3 . 5/13/2004
Wow, that could actually be a sequel for the movie, it was that good. Even though Tricia was who she was, I still feel really bad for her. Imagery was great, I loved it!
Raina1 chapter 3 . 3/4/2004
I just saw the movie tonight and I got such a kick out of Kiefer's voice and the phychological drama that went on, I had to check out some fanfics. I'm glad the first I read was top notch. You NAILED the Caller's character down and you managed to make Tricia completely unsympathtic. Nice touch with the elevator scene. Oh and I LOVED your Evanescence lyrics. I'm a huge fan of theirs.
Dark Draconain chapter 3 . 2/19/2004
I LOVE IT! Ah, so good! (I've been a fan of your work sometime, but my hideously lazy nature wouldn’t allow me to review until now.) This story was so well written, and the characters were so good I could actually ‘hear’ Kiefer’s voice (a wonderful thing, if I may). Bloody brilliant! D
*...subliminal message...update the Flatliners fic...pleads and begs...*
Cheers!
-Hobbit:)
Kellifer Monkey chapter 3 . 2/18/2004
I liked the use of the Stokholm Syndrome and tried it out a little myself. I think its something the movie could have done more with.
I liked that he got her to feel sorry for him, nice touch.
But the line that made it for me was definitely this...
"I've done things to you in my mind that you'd never believe. You've been a favorite thought of mine."
I can sympathise.
BTW Did you see Last Light yet?
Kellifer Monkey chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
That was perfectly fitting and I agree with other reviewers; its good enough to be the sequel.
My only complaint is that it puts mine to shame. I have trouble keeping to the outlines of the original, myself. What can I say I'm greedy... especially where Kiefer is concerned.
I loved the 'maggot shot', is that real?
Pretty please, can you slap and ending on this? It would be a crime not to.
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