Really good. I hope you have more planned!

Great fic can't wait to see more

Not sure where you're planning on going from here

This was a lot of fun and well written, great job!

Any idea when you'll write more of this, really want more Ranma fanfic.

Love the story!

Okay I only now noticed this story. From what I read I like what I am seeing. The Wonder Twins, boy does that take me back a while. I had forgotten, which DC anime series they first appeared in, but that is when I encountered the twins.

I am disappointed that Ranma can’t switch genders because it makes him into a OC kept as a Female.

I've read the Ben 10 Unlimited story and have to say I'm not a big fan of the angst or hurt stories any longer guess i just grew out of them. I though wanted to give yours a try to see what it is and have to say when I saw basically you not writing a similar story but a blatant copy just with Ranma rather then Ben I had to stop.

I think this maybe the third or fourth story I recall recently saying they are writing by being inspired by the source but then take the same scenes that even I can notice the copy.

And honestly I don't ever view Ranma as someone who could fit into this type of story but that is my opinion.

Honestly I feel it would be a more interesting story if it was Ranma who gained an agelessness due to his Ki training while all the people he loved died due to just the ravages of time that sounds like a more hurt/comfort story that I could read; but again just my opinion and I'm not sure if one like that has been done.

Now I may of been harsh I appoligise for that. Your writing is quite good no misspelling errors or major ones I could notice and the grammar and PoV was done quite well.

So I think I'm more disappointed to start reading the story and see a copy when I feel you can do so much more. But take my review at a pinch of salt continue writing and the future chapters maybe better but I can't really force myself to read them.

Thank you though for posting the story.

Not bad; Might be interesting to see the reaction of Raven with meeting someone who's part demon... Just saying...

Good chapter and story in general. The wonder twins were actually in the DCAU, they were members of the ultimen as Downpour and Shifter and were clones so your version is still unique enough, definitely looking forward to more.

well you've got me theorizing on what that voice could be so good job on the cliffhanger lol, the pace of the story seemed to pick up a bit too much for me but after a reread I may have not been paying attention the first time either way I can't wait to see what's next

Nice job on this chapter!

Good chapter

Looking forward to more and meeting the titans would be fun in my book!