Okay, so all I can say is WOW. I've been trying to figure out how to write Kimblee in a way that his psychopath tendencies and thoughts can be understood, and omg you have done it! You have depicted him so well, I am in awe. Be proud of your work, girl!

I'm surprised to see that this has only one review. This was very engaging. I think you captured both characters very well- I loved Ed's pov and I think you nailed Kimbley. It doesn't surprise me that he would be particularly hard to depict, but I think you did an excellent job. Your hard work paid off.

I love this scene in the manga and anime so I am really glad you wrote this! Thanks!