Can't wait for Loki to be given and can use the "Dad" title. Can't wait to read your new story.

Love the brothers teaming up, and hope everyone can forgive Loki for destroying the compound, at least he didn't destroy the world, can't wait for Peter to get comfortable calling Loki dad and Thor uncle.

Love the cliffhanger, so happy that Peter called Loki Dad, wonder how Loki is going to react to Peter being taken, don't think too much mercy will be shown by Loki or Thor. Wonder when Thor will get the title of uncle?

oh, oh they're in for a world. of. hurt when loki finds them...and thor, let's not forget uncle thor

That cliffhanger! I’m excited to read the next chapter!

OHHH BOY YOU DO NOT KIDNAP LOKI'S SON
IT AIN'T GOING OVER WELL FOR YOU IN THE END, BOI

love it so much!

I don't know if you'll ever do it but a parent teacher conference/ bring parent to school or something (idk never been to school so) but like flash teases peter that no one came and then of course Loki walks in the door
anyways nice stories

Please allow me, as an EMT and a college student working on getting a bachelor's degree in the science of nursing, that the virus wouldn't have caused organ failure for Peter. Unless he had previous history of Respiratory problems, he virus wouldn't have been hardly worse than a cold. Really the number of people dying from covid isn't as high as they are telling you. More people are dying because they aren't allowed to go to the hospital. Seriously, I've never seen such a bad case of Stupidity, "Sorry you can't come to the hospital, you are sick." Why are the freakin' hospitals there if they don't accept sick people? To look pretty?
Also, everyone is using the masks in the wrong way. They won't keep you from getting the virus, they keep you from spitting on people. Seriously, do your homework before you blindly believe everything the news tells you. You are wasting supplies that EMS personnel need to save lives.
Nice story, though. I really like the emotions that are surfacing. Keep up the good work! And don't let my stir-crazed rantings upset you, just take into consideration from someone on the inside that things aren't as bad as the government makes it seem. ;D

Love Loki being a concerned dad and confronting May about his right to be near Peter.

OH thank god you didn't die THis was a great chapter

I did not see Thor acusing Tony coming at all. Although in Thor's defence Loki mothered an eight legged horse in the myths, so not that unplausable I suppose.

That chapter was sooo cute, please write about Peter visiting New Asgard.

Aww...

Hi, uh it’s 1am so idk that I can give you deep coherent thought but I really like this story and hope you write more soon. It would make my self isolation much more interesting