Reviews for Spies, Lies, and Hopefully Nobody Dies
Ahnalaura Night chapter 10 . 5/24
I cannot express my awe and delight enough. Your ability to perfectly capture and portray mature versions of these characters is unmatched! I’ve binged all of your Descendants fics and every single one (including the collection of one shots) is phenomenal. I think the only reason I even consider myself a fan of Descendants is because of Give Me A Reason. You just have done such a wonderful job with these characters! Thank you for sharing your fantastic writing with fangirls like me!
Godschildtweety chapter 10 . 4/9
Really good
xez2003 chapter 10 . 4/7
I enjoyed this last chapter so much. It was packed with so much hope and warm Bal feels.I just love happy endings and this one was particularly satisfying because you've managed to capture Ben and Mal's essense (and their consequent relationship) even though this was an AU story.

Thank you so much for having fulfilled my request and written this Bal fanfiction. I will treasure it for a long long time.
Guardian of the Inheritance chapter 10 . 4/6
Well done
AmethystDragon14 chapter 10 . 4/6
I LOVE IT!
Awww! It was just SO sweet! Everything wrapped up nicely and the BAL I'm nearly crying
lol Ben you DO NOT come between Mal and her strawberries :D
Yeah Mal honey you have a future...
This story was amazing! Stay safe and take care! :)
WanderlustandFreedom chapter 10 . 4/6
I’m going to sob my eyes out. I think this is the happiest I’ve ever been with any ending. When Ben showed up, I checked to see how much was left and almost cried with relief. And wow! Adam came around!
TheroelWil98 chapter 1 . 4/6
This is one of the best stories I've read in a while.
I love the character work and the alternate universe you set up.
Keep up the good work and I look forward to any new chapters and / or stories of yours in the future.
beth.briggs chapter 9 . 4/5
Love this story, could not stop reading it! Cannot wait for the next update
SlytherinAvengerPrincess chapter 9 . 3/30
YASSSSSS MAL! GO GET YO BOI!
Angel1504 chapter 9 . 3/26
This is a good story, I hope you update soon
xez2003 chapter 9 . 3/25
So the chapter as a whole was good and made sense for most parts with Mal's reflection about all that had happened to her since meeting Ben and the confusion about the assassination attempts and the ACIA car following her sorted out when Ben arrived to explain it all.

The only part which left me perplexed was the last scene, particularly the last two paragraphs with the whole shooting at Ben reasoning, Lonnie involvement in all of it and Mal's decision to return to Auradon - I have to be honest you lost me there with Mal's trail of thought completely. My suggested solution is to re-explain it next chapter somehow.

Hope I've been of help somehow - I can't wait for the next chapter btw :D
WanderlustandFreedom chapter 9 . 3/25
Frick why don’t you just make me sob my guts out for the next few weeks? I got so excited when Ben appeared.
DemonFoxBK201 chapter 9 . 3/25
Oh boy. You have to make everything so complicated don’t you. Man, I was expecting a happy reunion and then instead Mal goes off on him. Oof.
You know I’m always just a little concerned about Mal, wondering if she has like schizophrenia or something with the voices and all... but all that aside, I saw that joke “must’ve lost it back in Corona” with the coronavirus going around. That cracked me up. It might not of even been intended that way (because obviously there are real places named Corona) but still.
This chapter almost seemed like a filler with all the skipping around but it was also important as we witnessed the fall of the Dragons from Mal’s
Hope Fitz chapter 9 . 3/25
I really liked it! I hope you keep writing this story because I really can’t wait to see where it goes from here! I’m gonna be honest, I was waiting for some cheesy and romantic thing to go on, like her getting pregnant or something like that to tie her even more to Ben
Guardian of the Inheritance chapter 9 . 3/25
Good job keep it up
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