Wow - that was just - wow. I'd better not describe what's going on in my head atm, as you have a way to make the reader feel sucked into the scene while reading. This is the seiest scene I#ve read in all my 20 years of fanfiction. Thanks for sharing it with us.

The insecurities of first sparking of love, so very well captured. Ans again we're getting the thoughts of both parties, i thoroughly enjoyed that, as well as the writing style, which makes me leave oh so often on other stories that have a good storyline, but sadly lack there.
I enjoyed the schene with the Waesley brothers, who finally act like brothers should for a sister, being protective without sealing her of in a cloister.
This story is really keeping me from work, I just can't seem to stop reading.

Wow, quite the start there, never saw the last pat coming. Wish I would have had the same nerve as these two when I was the same age. I really like the way you take us inside the feelings of both Ginny and Harry and I can't help being sucked in the story right from the start.
Amazing beginning, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Really interesting, I’m curious where you are going with the plot. I hope you’ll continue the story at some point.

The Hinny smut was so awesome! It was very sweet and fulfilling. i am so happy for early Hinny. Will be able to enjoy their relationship for longer. Great chapter.

Overall, I loved this story. The way you write sex scenes is very hot and I loved reading Harry and Ginny getting to know each other’s bodies. I also loved the tentative way they started their relationship, but eventually became extremely passionate and affectionate. Originally, this seemed like just a getting together fic, but once things shifted to the Abbey, you introduced a lot of cool mythology and lore and mystery. I love the incorporation of Aine and her connection to Ginny. I think you did some solid world building and think characters like Brogan, Cosgrove, and Sioda are interesting OCs. If there’s one minor nitpick, I’d say the story ends in such a way that makes it seem more like a prologue for the sequel than a story that would really stand alone. I’ll start reading the sequel soon, but won’t quite go at the same pace as I read this.

Another fantastic and hot scene to start things off. Interesting that Ginny is able to use her power to shield Harry. It seems she’s also channeling her power through him, which could be what helps him defeat Voldemort if she can do it when they’re not shagging. I wonder if this is building to a type of soul bond between them. I don’t understand Ginny’s schedule issue. Just because she passed the OWL doesn’t mean she’s obligated to take the NEWT level course. I like that Brogan helped protect Harry from Sioda, but maybe he should have just told them about what she said. If Brogan is a swan animagus, that implies he’s more like Aine’s son than her lover, doesn’t it? Also, I hope Harry and Ginny become animagi. With Ginny and Harry missing home, this does feel like it’s been an extended honeymoon and it’s time for them to return to their lives.

Haha there are a lot of rooms at Hogwarts, it could take them a while to shag in them all. Hmm, I wonder if Ginny was the one who undid the charm this time since she wanted him to hold her hips, or maybe Ginny is able to channel her power to Harry to use. Holy fuck, Percy isn’t just estranged from his family, but actually aligned with the Death Eaters? Wow, it’s very few fics that have him this dark. Though with his blank stares, I hope he’s just imperiused.

I’m super intrigued as to what Dumbledore’s research project is! My first thought was Horcrux hunt, but pre-HBP, I’m guessing not. Such a good story!

I like how Harry is considering his relationship and mistrust of Dumbledore without jumping to conclusions or letting his emotions get the best of him. Ooh, I wonder why Sioda is being mysterious, I really have no prediction for what’s going on with her. I wonder if crushing the rocks that were rock of the time portals is what makes up the sand inside of time turners. I like how even Ginny is annoyed at Brogan for phrasing things in a way that might make Harry jealous. I do love Harry’s line about trusting Ginny, even if he doesn’t trust Brogan; it’s the sign of a maturing relationship. I like how Ginny told Brogan not to hold out hope for her. His questioning about if Harry dies fighting Voldemort reminds me of how Snape seemingly thought Lily could be with him if Voldemort spared her after killing James and Harry. The way Brogan describes Sioda makes me wonder if she’s a Death Eater spy. Oh, I definitely don’t like her plan to try and break up Harry and Ginny, not that I think it will work. I hope Brogan does the smart thing and gives them a heads up about what Sioda said to him.

Wow, kind of rude of Ron and Hermione to use Harry’s room, especially since he wasn’t even sharing it with Ron. I hope they wash the sheets before Harry and Ginny get back lol. And I love that even busy Hermione managed to include 3 pages of research. So 3 months until the prophecy is known on Brogan’s birthday. Interesting that he’ll be DADA professor, as a good way to keep him in the story after they leave the Abbey. Of course, with his birthday so soon, the age difference between him and Ginny becomes 22 and 16, making his fascination with her even weirder. I like the comment about how quickly they make up when fighting and how similar they are to each other. I think it’s sweet of Harry not to want to hook up if Ginny can’t enjoy it the same way he can. The fact that Sioda’s eyes are similar to Harry’s is an interesting note, possibly a hint at them being distantly related? Fuck, Harry deciding they needed a mirror to watch themselves is brilliant.

Ginny and Harry are so clueless sometimes it hurts. And then they share such tender moments and it fills my heart with joy. Ginny dressing up for harry was so sweet! Great chapter.

I’m surprised Cosgrove just outright told them what happened, since I thought they wanted them to discover it for themselves. I like that you made Ginny the powerful one of the couple. I hope neither Harry nor Ginny reject their relationship because they don’t want to be controlled by prophecy. And the parts about Ginny sacrificing herself and being released at the time of Harry’s death worries me. I love Harry’s insistence that they’re equals and that he wants a future with her always by his side. I think your Dumbledore, while manipulative, has Harry’s interest and future more at heart than he did in canon. I’m also wondering how Harry’s wandless magic plays into Ginny’s destiny, or if that’s his own separate thing. Interesting that Ginny and Harry fell in love before being told anything while Brogan thinks he’s meant to be her true love because of his knowledge of rumors, as opposed to really knowing Ginny. I don’t like his insistence on telling Ginny if the prophecy says they are meant to be together, but I’m also guessing he’s wrong about what the prophecy would say. I still feel bad for him that he allowed a rumored prophecy to dictate his love life until this point.

I wonder if the Well of Aine will need to be used by Ginny to bring back Harry. I’m really loving all the lore you’re creating for this story. It feels weird that Harry thinks of Remus as Professor Lupin and not Remus or Moony, but I guess there’s more of a professional relationship than personal one between them here. And lol at Harry’s embarrassment at having to tell Remus about how he and Ginny ‘relax’ together. Interesting that Aine was a mare, Ginny’s patronus. And I wonder if this hints at multiple animagus forms for Ginny and/or Harry. I wonder if there’s a magical explanation for Ginny’s body aches and temper, since she seems to be confused by it as well. Whoa, a time portal! Is this any connection to Outlander or was that just also influenced by a similar mythology that you were influenced by? Lol I can’t believe I wondered if it was something magical when it was just Ginny getting her period. Oh wow, they created flowers just by having oral sex. Their connection is definitely powerful. And they somehow removed the red mare and the moon from the stained glass, too. This Ginny and Harry will definitely get powerful when they start to control whatever they’re doing.

You will give me a heart attack! I was like oh they're together, no they are not, oh they kissed again, nope and then the ending! I am curious about the twin's gift. Great chapter.