Great fic. The banter with the nurse at the end there was wonderful. And Mac's panic attack. And all the secret clues. Fabulous! Thanks for sharing!

This is great! Haven't code is awesome! Have to sleep, but I'll be back to finish this soon.

Excellent story! I love you’re writing style and I especially love all the hurt Jack! You are very talented and I hope you continue writing these masterful docs!

This a great hurt Jack story. He did such a great job with the clues. And his almost escape attempt. Love Jack telling Mac to go with his sister. And the banter with this nurse and Jack. lol I think Mac should talk/tell somebody about his dream. it was very scary and you never know with Murdoc. And Mac shouldn't feel guilty in any way. You both have enemies. Jack getting kidnapped and tortured isn't your fault. Mac dont distance your from Jack he doesn't blame you.

Excellent work on this chapter, I like everything about this chapter! Keep up the good work.

I’m usually a Mac whump fan, but this story is amazing. I just caught up on the last three chapters. Loved them all!

Eeekk, just found this and loved it! Total Jack whump. Love this story, looking forward to the next chapter . Thanks for sharing.

Wow. Intrigued and you got me on the edge of my seat!

excellent story Update soon I want to know who is kidnapping Jack because