a pretty great story so far. I look forward to seeing it continue

Your story is quite well-written and ineresting. I wonder how Velvet will act in the future, while being an ally to the Demon Slayers. Please, do continue writing my friend.
All the best to you

This is really nice. I didn't think both of these worlds would mesh that well but you made it happen and its really good. I'll be waiting for the next update.

Keep it up

demons fighting one another in one location? Oh no Venomization is happening. What demon will form form this? Hopefully not someon the level of an lord of calamity like Heldalf. looking forward to the results that combines both demons of both worlds.

Does velvet have any other items that she we introduce to the demon slayers? Seeing how will they react to her bag of holdings (her inventory bag capacity) will be a good omake.

Awesome so far.

Ahhh this is great... please write more.

Wow I really like this! Velvet is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great job so far! Kanae is adorable, and I do like how you’ve characterized Akeno so far. One thing I like is how you’ve shown how much Velvet misses her old crew by constantly comparing the people she meets to them. Also, you’ve captured Velvet perfectly, from her bluntness to the slight tendency to troll or be overdramatic. It’s a good thing you have her the village outfit back, though- I can only imagine what kind of chaos would come from Zenitsu seeing her in her usual in-game clothes! Looking forward to the next one!

If you are planning to bring some things in from Besaria are you going to bring some things or character from Zesteria?

Just binge read all 4 chapters and i gotta say, this is an amazingly well written story. I've been a big fan of ToB but haven't gotten around to watching Kimetsu no yaiba yet, and this story still hooked me. Grammar seems solid and the dialogue flows well. Hope to see more chapters down the road, and thanks for writing this story.

Wow this is a great story, and such awesome writing skill. Can’t wait for an update!

Hello there i'm a new reader your fic si far was good si continue like for add characters from berseria Can you put Oscar dragonia ? I known the guy was a vilain but he was cool and was'nt trully a bad someone who for in Velvet's way and even when he was defeated all he want was to protect his please put him like one of Velvet's new allies.

Kimetsu No Yaiba was one of my favorite anime in 2019. Tanjiro and Nezuko (even if she never said anything) were great together.

The only thing I didn't really like about the anime was Zenitsu's character. I wasn't so worried about his cowardness most of the time, it was the almost constant yelling which comprised his dialogue, which became really annoying to me.

In chapter 3 you briefly mentioned you were still considering pairings or if there may be any. From what occurred in the anime (so far) I thought Tanjiro had the potential to get together with Kanao or Shinobu (she could have just been teasing him). In your story the same are possibilities, but I would like to see Velvet/Tanjiro.

hmmm... i think that during the time Tanjiro and every one to "heal" at the butterfly estate you can have velvet not only trains aneko , Kanae and herself but also get herself familiar with the world of Kimetsu no Yaiba. like what will her thoughts on the Breath Styles be like?
will she be given a Nichirin Blade to replace the blade of her hidden weapon and what color will it turn to? "beting black or red"
i can see also that she interacting with the others now and then like i can see during one of her training Inosuke barge in and challenge velvet to a duel/fight or the Pillars try's to get more info from velvet by spying on her to having a friendly chat with her.
but never the lass this can also give you time to read the manga's will adding more to the story but it 100% up to you for you cave complete control of this story all i can do is throw ideas at you to use in any way you want.

If you make a pairing please a Velvet x Eizen. Please