| Reviews for The Immortal Hero |
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   KiraSatoo chapter 3 . 9/28 Umm when are you going to do the next chapter because I really like the story. |
| sevenkeller19 chapter 3 . 8/16 please more chapters |
| sohrabsadafi.eco chapter 3 . 7/15 I wonder Pandora's Actor might be different since momonga is different |
| sevenkeller19 chapter 3 . 7/14 please more chapters |
| 0vrLrd71 chapter 1 . 7/12 you made him act too much like canon even though they should have totally different personalities because of their upbringing... the premise is good and everything but your execution of it... not to be rude but, yeah there's a lot to be desired... I mean wtf? why make everything be like canon even though they are technically different people with the same name... ... |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/23 I love it do more chapters please 3 |
| Ogimme chapter 3 . 6/22 AWESOME |
| Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 3 . 6/13 Who the hell is Mark? He's not mentioned before now... Who cares if someone who's never been mentioned has a freaking quirk? |
| Joy is overrated chapter 3 . 6/5 this was decent, but it felt like you were boxing yourself in trying to force the same canon events even though he is in a different world. The ideas you have are good, but you keep trying to force the script so it comes as 'off' in places |
| Joy is overrated chapter 2 . 6/5 This is better, I like how you started to add stuff into the story. What would happen if you introduced them to horror or action films? would introducing them to stuff like gaming keep their negative aspects down? There is alot of things im this world that can push them to grow, they're basically like sheltered kids. demiurge being interested in detective dramas is something I can see. good chapter, I like the ideas and how you portray the characters, good work |
| Joy is overrated chapter 1 . 6/5 how did he alter their settings if he was the one that created them? this chapter feels like a waste, its not bad, but he was given a chance to add more and you didnt. He was limitless and you limited him, doesnt make sense to me. I'll keep reading, hopefully you'll actually introduce something new |
| EchoAwakens chapter 3 . 5/31 Very good fanfiction, hope to see more in the future! |
| Perseus D. Uzumaki chapter 3 . 5/30 The story is quite entertaining and I hope to see it continued. This also bring the question how will momonga progress from here since he leads a double life and he does have a human side so he is affected emotionally. How will he interact with others as momon. What will he do to Izuku and how will that change who gets One for All. |
| Oakenshi chapter 3 . 5/28 this is a freakin awesome story, as for your writing, it's good. please make more chapters in the future. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/27 The story is good so far. I'm not sure I like the idea of other players/factions from ydrassel coming into the story though. But do what you like . 8/10 |
