Reviews for A Union of Human and Gorlock?
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 7 . 6/28
Cool chapter here. Nice interaction between April and Jimmy.

Keep the good writing.
MarioDS01 chapter 7 . 6/28
Was curious on how Jimmy was going to spend any actually down time with April with some sort of urgency of saving her family, kingdom and planet. But the way you wrote this work really well. Sure it would of been nice for him to spend more time to relax and put aside the brain blast/idea, but this is Jimmy, once he gets it, he goes to work on it. But we should have have more faith that of this sort of down time will happen once the mission is completed.

Curious of the plan and look forward to more of this story.
The J.A.M. a.k.a. Numbuh i chapter 7 . 6/27
Guess they'll be swimming later :D :D :D
Yolotsin Xochitl chapter 6 . 6/11
Yeah, I like It. The king remaind me a lot to certain yemusiano.
Sara08 chapter 6 . 5/14
Great work in this chapter!
Gdog90 chapter 6 . 5/13
Haha. Nice. You know, Robin Hood is one of my favorite Disney movies.

I can’t wait for the next chapter.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 6 . 5/11
Heh, Jimmy is a genius but he's still a kid; no wonder he channeled his inner Robin Hood, Daffy Duck and Roger Rabbit.

Keep the good writing.
Yolotsin Xochitl chapter 5 . 4/17
I love this so far. I just wish the chapters were longer.
oscuro oscuro chapter 5 . 3/23
Buen capítulo espero el siguiente
MarioDS01 chapter 5 . 3/23
Nice job on the King. Can see why he was/is annoyed of his status and tasks he was put under until he became king by force or whatever way he made it happen. Interesting that after all the failures to taking down April, he does not seem to have any fondness toward her or secretly have any. Then again that would be awkward to having in the story since most likely there is a huge age gap. Sort of an idea, but that's up to you. Would (of) make the story possibly more interesting.

Sorry I don't have much of ideas for this story. Personally I wish there would be a way to close the huge physical gap/distance between Jimmy and April and her family so near have to travel so far or long just to see each other. And no I rather not have December rule April's homeworld if she and her family would leave on or near Earth. Kind of a complicated issue for you to figure out.

Until we reach that point, its more important to take out December somehow. I look forward to future updates!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 5 . 3/23
Very good one, and cool touch about the cities/towns' names.

Keep the good writing.
MarioDS01 chapter 4 . 3/17
That makes things more interesting and a little more complicated or something like that. Guess that is sort of why she sent a message or Jimmy since its not like she can leave her home world anytime to visit Earth with her duties. But hopefully there is a way to work things out. But there is kind of more important task at hand before figuring out that part.

Kind of funny and ironic mention how a lot of humans reaction to illnesses.

Nice to see another chapter this this and look forward to more in the future and any other updates or new stories.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 4 . 3/17
Heh, yeah, April came with a good description.

And about Cindy making a scandal whenever Jimmy makes a small mistake... to be fair, Jimmy's mistakes tend to be huge scientific mishaps that put the whole town in danger.

Keep the good writing.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 2/3
Good one here, and yeah, April seems to be hiding something very awful.

Keep the good writing.
MarioDS01 chapter 3 . 2/3
Had a feeling April would save Jimmy after being attacked.

For the kiss, not sure that is a seal of trust, may still have feelings for Jimmy, then again it could be, who knows.

Curious what kind of trouble is happening on the planet. Maybe Jimmy could help...
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