WHAAAAAAA

here is proof i read it

:O I feel very guilty that I haven’t really been reading this earlier... I just read from the last chappie I read up to here. ALSO, AAAAAAHHHHHHH! HERONPAW AND IVY?! I don’t know how to feel about this... *nervously paces*
And, as usual, amazing writing. YOU ARE SO GOOD AT THISSSSSS!
In response to a previous chapter - Heck, yeah, the world is definitely a mess. Welcome to America, friends.

She should totaly leave and join thunderclan! but if she doesn't like Heronpaw...then why was he in the phrophecy? (*scratches head*)hmmm... :)

Is Holly the Holly that will choke the Ivy? (wow that sounded weird...) Great book though!:D

i know i said my name was feather mint but i prefer moon

Scar is mad, what's new lmao
also that first little bit was * so good * the description of her getting chased was rlly suspenseful good job!
nice chapter :D
(i actually quite like the funny little names like sneezecloud. but twigbranch? twigbranch? bramblestar those mean the exact same thing.)
(* hiding away from smirking hawkfrost *)

you are an amazing writer

crystals back back back again crystals back back tell a friend.
that vision was really well written!
and yeah, the world sucks right now :(

oh what? cloud what are you doing?
also! i'm starting to ship heronpaw and ivy,,, they'd be really sweet together

nooo :(
you've written this battle scene exceptionally well! great job :D

oooo who's spying on them :000
i like heronpaw!

aaand the clans are here! i like how you've properly differentiated the words the different groups use.

i like scar! he seems really cool, i'm glad him and ivy are getting along.
(HOLLYLEAF SHOULD HAVE LIVED AND BECOME DEPUTY AND I WILL STAND BY THAT)

any cat named after battle
wounds will instantly sound 10x more badass lol
also! u should be proud of that it was a pretty sick simile.
(tawnypelt should have been shadowclan leader. not tigerheartstar)

flame sounds both very interesting and very scary. oof lol