| Reviews for The Chosen One and The Inability to Catch a Break |
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Guest chapter 4 . 6/11 Bi-Harry is good because it doesn't matter what gender s/he's reincarnated then! Bi-Harry is the best head-canon. |
Bagrat chapter 5 . 6/3 You have my condolences, that's terrible news! Take your time, and if this story never ends up finished I will still be grateful for what we did get. |
Joey394 chapter 5 . 5/20 It’s ok be with your cat she needs you |
Aizen Hikari 99 chapter 5 . 4/28 Update some more please |
eclipse.firsttears101 chapter 5 . 4/27 awww~ I hope ur Cat has a peaceful endhey picture him or her in kitty heaven with all the things they love |
Gravit18 chapter 4 . 3/13 I am absolutely in love with this story. It is comedy gold and I love it. I am very sorry that you have lost (are loosing?) your cat. Take all the time you need and when you feel 'the fun' coming back and continue posting I will be celebrating. I will probably do a mini celebration dance. Very good writing and awesome concept. I honestly don't think you'll need to think about pairings for a loooong, long time. Thank you for writing! |
Zero kami no mu chapter 5 . 3/11 my heart goes out to you for your cat. even thou i am late to finding this story. its very good. the only thing that should be illegal is the number of things Kiyomi breaks the laws of logic with. now than as for pairings...either Hinata or Shikamaru...or maybe find a way to get both.i can easily see Kiyomi 'helping'(read corrupting) Hinata and dragging Shikamaru just for the hell of it. |
Elfin69 chapter 5 . 2/18 Sorry to hear about your can, i understand completely since we have lost some of our beloved pets and have a cat now that has problems and we would do anything for her. |
Elfin69 chapter 4 . 2/18 hopefully she is only teasing Death since i cannot see her actually being mean to even him. Love how she did the motorcycle |
Elfin69 chapter 3 . 2/18 those two are too funny together and i do not see her ever letting Asuma go in any way (death) and now they are enjoying just being a kid for her and young for him. |
Elfin69 chapter 2 . 2/18 This is hilarious, i love how she is able to use her magic and do things that she an while protecting herself and her friends. |
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 2/18 Awesome beginning, hopefully she will actually be able to do what she plans and have a good life |
Tempest S chapter 5 . 2/6 (T_T) My own cat isn't do that great this winter. This is probably her last one. |
littlerostte chapter 5 . 2/6 it's okay ! I love your story! oh stone face garra with Harry oh think of the fun of that! or shikamaru! someone how's totally not prepared for the typhoon that is harry |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/3 My condolences. |