Thus story ie really great! Can't wait to read more!

I am absolutely in love with this, I cant wait for more

Aaaaah, I wish we will have more Major's moments! I love him in this fanfiction. I hope you'll uptade soon

I wonder if Addy is right about the scent thing is right about the field? And where is Alice, has she found her mate?

Awesome! That turned out great girlie. If you want ideas for a scene you have in mind or something, lemme know. I’m at your command :D

Great story please keep going I like your new character. Thanks

OOOOooh! I think I lost my panties at that Cowboy part. *blushes bright red*
Holy mother, girlie I hope you update soon, I REALLY wanna see some more Jasper moments. Ooh! Can you also let a guy (NOT from the regular group of teens that Bella hangs out with in the movies, and also not Tyler) get the hots for her and give Jasper a bit of competition? I really wanna see his possessive-side ~.~
Or mayber let it be a vampire? In all fanfics, they Always let the competition for the OC be human but I would think it more of a challenge (And for the Major to show up ;P) if the other party was a vampire. That has never happened in a fic before, to my knowledge at least. Unless they already knew eachother BEFORE the guy turned into a vampire.
You could also have the story divert from the Original plot a little bit by making things interesting with another rogue to be added to the James and Victoria's group or something. Either way, since the story has already a twist with Alice and Jasper breaking up, you could also add other twists and turns to the story that would slowly change the story but still get the same ending. Like let the Volturi meet with Addi but have Marcus gain a parental bond with her or something. Maybe have Caius and Aro also gain a special familial bond with her. Nobody makes a plot twist in their stories like that and I really want to see how that would go. If you don't wanna, it's fine but meh, just an idea I really wanted to see happening. A special bond with the Volturi (or one of them at least) kings that could change a lot of the plot and give it a whole new twist.
Please tell me you are going to plan something special like this (maybe not the same but still) in the story somehow.

There are many fics out there about Oc's who get together with one or the other character but never have I seen one with an Oc that gets a special bond with the Volturi but is still part of the Olympic coven. :S
Still story is going good. Keep it up ;)

Already addictive stuff! Great writing!

Could you possibly reformat the chapters to double spacing? It’s very difficult to read the way it is now

i hope you're doing great, author! hope to see more soon

Look forward to reading more soon! Very interesting so far!

Awwwwww yea!

Great story hope you keep going will be watching for updates.

Love this story can't wait for more!

I loved the chapter! I can't wait for more!