Hey are you gonna update this story? It’s really great so I hope you do it !

I love this story! Thank you for writing it. This chapter in particular had a little bit of everything for me. I remember watching their relationship develop on the show, (IMO it hasn’t been the same since they left) and for me this story captures the essence of it perfectly. I’m hoping you have plenty more chapters planned. Ultimately I’d really love a ‘happy ever after’ for them after all they’ve been through, perhaps with them marrying and adding to their family. Can’t wait to read more...

Love this story

I'm enjoying the story very much and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope their life becomes normal and there are other babies who come along.

Tony and Ziva making out in the kitchen doing dinner is just domestic perfection

Absolute perfection. I honestly have no words for this... your writing is just *chef's kiss* amazing. Thanks for this!

Loved Tali giving her a Ima a tour of the school she attends.
Glad to see even though Tony and Ziva fight they also make up

Absolutely love this story. Always worth waiting for. Good things are

Finally! Was half asleep when the notification came in but wanted to fully awake when reading. Lol

I just love the way you get Tony & Ziva exactly. The angry, the sad, the flirty, the jealous, all thevmoments. You gets them so well.
I just love how Tall & Ziva's relationship is blooming. Seems Tali have had enough of dad. Its Ima's time now. Lol.
I just love this little family. They're coming together so well.

Thank you again for the update. Can't wait for more. :)

Could not wait to get home and read the latest chapter. I felt so excited when I got the update email! It’s been worth waiting for and I’m happy there’s more to come. I really love the attention to detail in your story you’ve included all scenarios and it doesn’t feel rushed or glossed over like many Tiva stories, acknowledging that they can’t just suddenly live all happy every after without clearing the air first. Looking forward to the details coming out. Loved the first kiss! I would like to read a meet up with Jimmy just cos I love his character on the show but guessing senior as that would make more sense family wise. Anyway love it! can’t wait for more, has fed my Tiva addiction for today

When I saw the notification that there was an update on this story I gave a little cry of joy. It is by far my favorite story. I love the dedication you take to each character ... how you slowly rebuild and develop the relationship between Ziva, Tony and Tali in a very realistic way. without rush ... giving the characters time to become a family again. I love it.

I really like this chapter. They are figurings things out and there is a lot to figure out. I liked how she wasnt really mad but at the same time it hurts to see her so insecure. About Tonys anger but also the teacher-woman. It rings very true though. Tony does have the right to be angry and she knows it. And she also feels like she doesnt have the right to him but she will fight for it. Ugh. There just really is so much trauma for both of them.

Great update. You really master the awkward tension between Tony and Ziva. It feels very real. They have so much to work out, and Ziva has so much to explain. I loved the scene in Tali's school, you write everyones favourite five year old so well. I'm looking forward to more.

Didn't realise this update took you months actually! But it was worth it. Loved the chapter.
I'd like to know more about Zi being back with the Mossad.
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
And as for the guest(s)? I wish it was one of the team, but yeah, Senior makes more sense I guess...

I seriously love this story so much. I have read other Tony/Ziva reunion fics, but none as good as this. Not even close. Your dialogue, your descriptions, your characterization, everything is just amazing. My one critique, if anything, is that Tali sometimes talks like she is way older than six years old, but she could also just be very smart and have a well-developed vocabulary. Everything else is literal perfection.
I love the thought and detail you put into your chapters and that you really emphasize the rebuilding of the relationships between Ziva and both Tony and Tali, because so many stories just have them jumping right in like nothing happened and that simply isn't realistic. Just another reason why I love your writing so much. I don't care how long it takes you to update, just please do! I am so committed to this story, you have no idea.
My guess for the special guest is Mr. DiNozzo Sr! Also, I'm not sure if it has been mentioned in earlier chapters or not, but are you keeping the timeline for this story in line with the current events happening during that time? For instance, are you going to mention anything about the pandemic or anything? Are they going to be quarantined together? Because if so, that could definitely make for an interesting dynamic.
Anyway, this story is fabulous and this review is way longer than I meant for it to be, but I love you and your story and I am so excited to see it continue. Take care and please update soon!