please update

Really great story continue as soon as possible. Please don't give up

There’s nothing wrong with taking inspiration from another story, but there are many things that are basically copy/pasted from other stories aside from Legacy such as near the end of Chapter 3.

Really enjoying this story please continue as soon as possible and give Naruto Madara's Gunbai/war fan later

Really great story enjoying it slot please continue as soon as possible

Please have Naruto gain Kamui in both mangekyou sharingan eyes first since it seems the ability that would take the longest to master. Then next amaterasu, tsukiyomi, susanoo, and kagutsuchi. Finally kotoamatuskami

All right, a lot to say here so bear with me.

Firstly, I loved Legacy back in the day, primarily how it was an OP Naruto that made sense because he was forced to activate the Sharingan early and he and Hinata copied the UchihaHyuuga libraries and trained together constantly while sending clones to the academy which is an utter waste of time.

It's really the only Sharingan Naruto fic I've ever stuck with, as I consider it to just be "the eye of hax" and find it far more interesting when it's an Uzumaki centric fic where Naruto works to revive the Uzumaki clan and preferably leaves Konoha to rebuild Uzushiogakure. Utilizing the strong and dense Uzumaki chakra, innate fuuinjutsu prowess, and shadow clone training makes him OP but he has to work for it and I feel like it's all him rather than late fights just evolving into Mangekyo and Rinnegan spam.

That said, I loved his use of the Rinnegan to revive people in Legacy so I'd be happy for you to keep that. I'll stick with the story for now, but how long depends on the harem and what direction things go.

Of course if you're going to bash a bunch of people anyway I'd be happy if he just left for Uzu, but I'm pretty bored of Konoha stories and have zero interest in reading about him in another of the great villages.

As for harem suggestions, Shizuka is gorgeous, has a wind affinity, and is very rarely used. Karin is an Uzumaki, and has her healing ability, so she'd be a great candidate as well who is also rarely utilized; pretty easy to just have Naruto save her from the bear instead of Sasuk I prefer Naruto to be with strong women who can defend themselves. Pakura is a good candidate if you AU her story, like say she was left for dead and ends up training Naruto in Wave. I vote no on Yugito as I've never found her particularly attractive (though I live Matatabi) and no on Sakura as well for obvious reasons. Temari is another good candidate. Hanabi could be good too, as Naruto Hinata Hanabi is rare.

If you don't mind pairing him with older women, Anko us a great candidate, as is Mei, very underutilized too. Likewise with Yugao and Kurenai. I've never really found Hana attractive. Uzumaki Honoka should at least be associated with him, I'd be fine with her in the harem as well.. Mabui is very hot and would make a fine addition, I particularly like her incarnation in The Last Prayer where she's a sapiosexual, attracted to intelligence, and can barely control herself when Naruto talks fuuinjutsu.

I like that you're having Naruto focus on fundamentals like kenjutsu and bojutsu, hope you include fuuinjutsu as well. The three summons is a great idea, and a good Orochimaru is an interesting change.

Honestly one of the things I liked the least about Legacy was Hiashi being evil. I love that his being a dick led to Naruto and Hinata living and training together through her banishment, but I'd prefer if Hiashi was a good character if not a good father, and if Hinata is to be banished for the Elders to do it while Hiashi is gone on a diplomatic mission or something.

Another of my favorite things about Legacy was how godlike Hinata became, so I really hope you keep that. That's all that comes to mind for now, looking forward to more.

Using other stories as a bases for your own is fine, but there is a line beyond which you're basically rephrasing what the original author wrote. There are still lots of similarities to Legacy in small inconsequential scenes like Kyubi's vixen line about Hinata and Naruto's response. I would suggest actually developing more original dialogue/scenes, particularly as that wasn't heavily plot focused but still paraphrased straight from Legacy. Good luck on the rest of the story.

Good chapter. And please add Shion,Sara and Shizuka to the harem. Be safe

Great chapter

Really great story cannot wait to see what happens next .continue as soon as possible please enjoying your story very much

Loved it, excellently done update!

Wow Hinata dad is a tool, and they I like how you kept the kumo guy alive. Also did he just unlock the next stage of his sharingan?

putting aside my bad opinions of OC characters, I do have to give credit where credit is do this is a pretty good read. something I really hope you keep in my is that at the start it's always a good idea to show some of naruto's training instead of skipping over it (later on in the story skipping is a good thing when you establish naruto's level of power).

If I could give a shout out to Ino to be in the harem, I've only seen a few good ficts with her in it (Outfoxed and fox in the Leaf being a few.)

damn it I'm still not sold on the OC character! can you PM me a little more info on her, I'm willing to give her a chance but the fact That an OC has an important role really makes me frown you know.

Also I noticed on chapter 3 the author note at the top, if I could give a tip it would be to put the author's note in BOLD to differentiate it from the story itself, anyway I look forwards to the next update.

Is Naruto going to meet Samui soon thanks to stopping Hinata's kidnapping? Keep up the good work, can't wait for more.