| Reviews for Collateral Damage |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/23 i finished reading these 18 chapters in barely 2hours. it’s like 3 am right now and i have to go to work in a few hours, still don’t know how i’ll deal with my fatigue since i just want to read another of your fictions. it’s been a long time since i’ve read such a good story on these twos, made me very emotional reconnecting with this pairing! thanks for your hard work, it’s a real pleasure |
Stickybun24 chapter 15 . 7/23 So many unanswered questions! And only three chapters to go! Ahhh! |
Stickybun24 chapter 14 . 7/23 Seriously in awe. Everyone read this. Tell your sisters tell your wives. |
Stickybun24 chapter 13 . 7/23 Omg. This is just an amazing story. The details are amazing. The twists. The mystery. What’s gonna happen?! |
Stickybun24 chapter 12 . 7/23 Holy. Shit. This. Is. Fire. You do such a good job of writing the characters thoughts and feelings without writing 8 paragraphs of describing. It really makes the story move at a really good pace. I love vivid deep dives into thoughts and feelings, but you have a great balance of just enough to still keep the story rolling. |
Stickybun24 chapter 11 . 7/23 DETECTIVE ROCK LEE! I’m screaming. This is the best AU ever. You seriously do an amazing job of creating the AU with *just* enough details from narutoverse. It’s perfection. |
Stickybun24 chapter 10 . 7/23 Gaaahh! I’m shaking! My heart is racing! This is so good! |
Stickybun24 chapter 9 . 7/23 “She said in a voice as thin and cutting as paper” ... I see what you did there. This is SUCH A GOOD STORYYYYY. Omg. I’m addicted. |
Stickybun24 chapter 8 . 7/23 This is just so good. I can’t stop gushing. Your AU is flawless! I love the relationships. I love the backstories. I love everything. I love your portrayal of the “side characters” ... you’re just so spot on with it all. |
Stickybun24 chapter 7 . 7/23 Omggg. Hiashi is EXCELLENT. This story is AMAZING. You don’t over fill the story with unnecessary details. It’s just enough to know what’s going on without boring the reader with crazy background story. You write so well! |
Stickybun24 chapter 6 . 7/22 Seriously. You write sex so well. And I LOVE possessive Neji. I love how you’ve written him. So natural and effortless. |
Stickybun24 chapter 5 . 7/22 Also holy shit. You write sex like it’s real. None of this “coming with three fingers slamming into herfingernail on the clit” insanity. (Not that that isn’t hot, but this is just so good) |
Stickybun24 chapter 4 . 7/22 Holy shiiiiit! You have Neji’s NUMBER. This is totally how he would be with a woman. Achingly reserved and slow. This is such a good read. |
Stickybun24 chapter 3 . 7/22 This is so intense. The suspense! I’m so stoked about this story. |
Stickybun24 chapter 2 . 7/22 I’m so invested in this story now. This is so great. |