love it.
please write more soon.

love it.
please write more soon.
wow and yay for this story

You can't stop there. Dagnabit I hate cliffhangers. February was a long time ago. Kick it up. Give us more.

I love this cant wait for more

This story is amazing! I love Harry being able to talk to animals, I haven't read a fic like that yet.
Steve seems so hilarious, I love the scenes with him in.
I can't wait for the next update!

Seeing alot of guest reviews bashing this story. I dont see why it is a good story and his. Especially when it's just complaints on Harry being OP or theirs not enough bashing. Whats here is already good and its annoying to see bashing with no real critiques on the story. If you dont like dont read it, all your doing is trying to either piss off the author or taking the piss out of him.

Cant wait until your update love your stories

good hope for more

This is an okay story. The protagonists isn’t evil and the story is light hearted.

However, this story is massively childish and immature. Harry is a walking God. It’s not serious and the humor really isn’t funny. The neglect part of the story can be summed up as, “eh, it’s okay, I forgive you on right away.” It’s very unbelievable and hard to get immersed in the story because of how unrealistic the characters actions and personalities are.

Really? Steve took Harry with him on that raid. That’s totally believable! What caring parental figure wouldn’t take their 10 year old son on a kidnapping/sex trafficking gang bust. The feds and cops doing all the time. It’s called “take your son to work and traumatize them for life” day.

You just hate it when you seem to be reading an okay neglect fic. Everything is going okay, even if the protagonist is to op for their age. Then bam! The protagonist sees the parents who threw him away to be tortured and abused so they could look after his sibling and he thinks “I don’t hate these people.” It’s then you know the neglect fic is on a downward trajectory.

You can have Harry forgive his parents in the end on some level. But having him think about the betrayal as “eh” is absolutely unbelievable. An 11 year old is going to feel hatred. A 31 year old is going to feel hatred for these people. To not feel that is abnormal and illogical. It also destroys one of the main pillars of a neglect fic.

Wow Harry’s like an unbelievable powerful, god like being. Will he be walking on water next? You know, because he is Jesus. There is a thing as “to OP” and then there is the “utterly ridiculous.” Come on dude. You really need to tone it down.

Two chapters in and this story already has two giant red flags for me. First, there should only be one speaker per paragraph. Second, there are way too many flashbacks. That's more than enough to kill any interest I might have had in this story.

I like this story. James and Lily need major bashing for stupidity.

I really liked this chapter. Dumb Dumb taken down a peg. Yes! Snowball