Hello again! I practically just reviewed your last one, but I want to say again that you write the characters and plot extremely well! This one has a lot more romance so it didn’t feel quite /as/ much like a typical Scooby Doo episode, but I really, really enjoyed it. The romance adds a lot to it

I actually acted in a couple of plays for our church when I was a kid. I played King Herod and the boy who carried the baby Jesus up to the Manger for a Christmas play. I really enjoyed doing the roles because I didn't have to say anything or sing. It was hard for me to keep a straight face, but like I said, I really enjoyed doing it because it brought great family memories our family. It's okay Freddy, you'll get it, just relax!

I remember THOSE years when you got in trouble and your parents had to sit with you and tell you their Ultimatum or you'd get grounded..

Hey, this is an amazing story! I'm only just getting around to it now, but I am already so hooked on it! The part about Fred thinking he was the phantom was funny, it reminded me a bit of Fred in A Pup. And the reveal was really well written, I could even hear the Mystery Incorporated villain reveal music in my head as I read it hahaha. I think it's really clever how you've related the gang's feelings to the characters they are playing too. And of course, the group bonding session was the cherry on the cake! Keep up the good work, I'm excited to keep reading and get into your threequal ! :)

Can't wait for more

What a great story

Good for Velma she was strong, but it's still not good enough Shaggy still needs to step up and admit their relationship publicly

I thought it was gonna be the professor, got me. Also how nice of them to forgive the culprit I don't think I've seen that done before

So that's why Fred couldn't remember his lines. And good job Velma you gotta be firm for guys to take you seriously

Wow I never saw Shaggy's story coming

Lol so that's what Fred and Daphne do when they're looking for clues

That's so sad Fred practicing during class, poor guy hope he gets it eventually

I have no idea whether I trust Holden or not

I really like Velma and Daphne's girl talk moments, I think Velma enjoys them more than she would like to admit

Lol only Fred and Daphne would do that