I LOVE IT! please update this story!

I've always seen the Phantom Field as being sort of like Valhalla, where warriors from different realms can go to train, hang out, and generally just relax until they are needed for another battle. At least that's the impression I've always gotten.

Not bad. I think that this story has a lot of potentials and I'm very intrigued to see where it could go in the future. I do think that it could use a little work though. It's a minor detail, but when I was reading the battle with Yang and Gordeau Vs. Emerald and Mercury, it was kind of difficult to see what was actually happening at times.

Though I'm not entirely sure if that's a result of how it's been written or if it's just my brain fucking up. Honestly, I'm willing to bet on either at this point.

Signed
Griselda Yashimoto

I hope that Rachel Alucard decides to put together her own entourage composed of Ruby Rose, Linne, and Naoto Shirogane.

I'm a little confused about exactly what is going on here.

I thought that after System No. XX was defeated all the warriors got to return to their home dimensions. Unless System No. XX somehow survived or maybe somebody decided to harness her power and create their own version of the Phantom Field dimension where all the warriors get to live, train, and fight each other as much as they want with no serious repercussions. That would be kind of neat.

Kind of like how most Super Smash Brothers fanfiction has all of the characters living together in a giant mansion in some weird pocket dimension whenever they're in between tournaments and or missions. And now I'm imagining System No. XX as Master Hand. Shit, that's actually a really good comparison now that I think about it.

Honestly, if nothing else I just hope that Rachel and Neo will finally get to enjoy their tea party. Also, Roman and Hazama should not be allowed to be in the same room alone for extended periods of time. That level of snarky humor will eventually destroy the Multiverse.

I'm a little disappointed that we haven't seen Susanoo. I know it's only the second chapter and that there's probably going to be more characters introduced as we go, but still, he's probably my favorite character (after Neo of course). And it would be fun to see Ozpin and Salem deal with a foreign god.

Somehow I knew before I even started reading this that Hazama was going to meet Roman. The two could practically be brothers. I can't wait to see how this all going to affect the story of RWBY.

Also, I love the fact that Neo may have ended up saving Beacon (I assume that she was the one who somehow got in contact with them).

hehehehe hahahahahaha AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! * ahem * sorry about that I ended up channeling Iori Yagami with that laugh eh heh err any way nice story so far I cant wait to see whats next! _

The Cavalry has arrived! * insane grin * nice story idea! XD

1. I hope Heart's world view and innocence doesn't get shattered by the world of RWBY beyond Volume 3.

2. What's Pyrrha and Torchwick gonna do now their alive in this Story?

3. Sense Kokonoe's here, that means we'll see characters not in BBTAG yet? That's cool.

I want to see the rest of the other characters fight alongside Team RWBY and JNPR.

Oh that would be epic to see

I love how you did the announcer for the Crossing fate fight. I did notice a small error in that. You said that Yang had hit her "Robotic arm" on Mercury's chest but at this point 1 she was saved from getting her arm cut off, 2 it would be another volume before she got it. Elizabeth and Hazuma saving Roman is gonna issue a long chat(?) with Neo, so great to bring her on board. Can't wait for the next chapter, so I take it since they announced the fight they still have the crystal goddess lady with the funny introductions. I figure they'd put her in a necklace so Ruby can just wear and show her the sights.

Man this is going to get good
and about the changes I'm surprised that in the end you decide to cut off Yang's arm but hey it's your decision
I will not object
On the other hand I wanted to know that you are those who totally blame Oz or you are those who understood that you were a victim of the circumstances?
I speak because I want to know if you're going to be fucking it or are going to treat it normally
on the other hand will Salem have allies?
because I only know about this fic in depth to the characters of RWBY, Blazblue and Persona
and of those 2 I thought that Hazama would be an ally of salem but from what I see it won't be like that
making only Susano left
why Nine ... she's not sure
in person there is only Adachi but he is ... weird so I don't know either
Those of IN-BIRTH do not know much the truth just know Hyde for others no idea
but in the end to say
good cap and I look forward to the next one that this fic a bright future
and greetings from Argentina

Is there a chance that they take down the so called brothers god? I mean, Yu alone can take them down. Great chapter.