| Reviews for Black & Bright |
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Jecnavychs chapter 1 . 3/4 please continue. like a breath of fresh air for the wbwl trope. |
fernyyuki chapter 1 . 2/29 espero que pronto publiques |
zero fullbuster chapter 1 . 2/28 Love it. Please write more soon. |
ygrekks chapter 1 . 2/25 Well, I sure hope this story will be updated :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12 Looking forward to what the reactions will be when Harry turns up at Hogwarts I assume alongside normal magic he’ll use his Obsucurus to |
only harmony chapter 1 . 1/4 I really liked the premise but I am also waiting for more chapters before a good detailed review. Keep it up. - Kshitiz |
anarion87 chapter 1 . 1/2 nice story so far |
Fast Frank chapter 1 . 1/2 Interesting premise. |
JohnMonty chapter 1 . 1/2 I like it so far, will Harry grow to end up hating Rose? Will he be paired with her in the future? Will there be lemons? Please don't have rose be paired or befriend Ron "the pig of Gryffindor" Weasley or harry paired with Ginny. Can't stand that moron Ron and Harry and Ginny isn't a good match at all. I'd like to see the twins eventually together that would be good. Looking forward to reading more, update soon! |
Ivygldg chapter 1 . 1/2 I should really really really have waited for the next chapter, because now I'm in one of the worst places reading fanfiction: the wait for the next chapter. I loved how you wrote all the 'Harry can't live with us' because I liked how you made the discussion between Lily and James shift from 'A mother with reasonal arguments and a father being stubborn' to 'A father with clear mind and a mother clouded by her heart'. Many authors make the first and they leave it at that, and I have only seen you transform the first into the second. So kudos to you and hoping to read you soon. |
Dan68 chapter 1 . 1/2 Lookimg forward to more chapters |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1 It hurts my heart to know that Harry is going to suffer worse than canon. Poor baby boy. Will James confront Sirius? Will he get a trial this time around? It seems unlikely that the Potter's wouldn't want some type of explanation as to why he betrayed them. Why would Dumbledore talk to James and Lily about Rose's condition and not a healer? They were at St. Mungo's after all. From the way this was explained it would seem unlikey that a healer would have told the Potter's that Harry was a squib. They would have had no way of knowing. |