| Reviews for Ashes to Embers |
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   Ms. Sleepy Clover chapter 1 . 7/6 Huh, while it does suck that youre rewriting the story, I actually like the change where Gary and Leaf are going with them rather then going on their own. 4 is better then 2. As a quick note, go with the idea from "EDventures in Kalos_By:Insane Dominator(Go check it out, its awesome) for the Gym battles. Show one of the 4s full battle and do a quick recap of the other 3s battles. |
| WeeDevil chapter 2 . 6/12 Really great chapter |
| Nightshadegirl chapter 2 . 5/10 interesting, we got to see pikachu's family. |
| Gouravsilentreader chapter 2 . 5/8 Awesome and interesting story Love it so far Waiting for the next part eagerly Please update soon |
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 2 . 5/8 Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz |
| TriskelionForever chapter 2 . 5/8 I can see them being roped into playing with the other chus and I find this meeting mostly better than the last since they were at least civil with each other, which is great! I love the names you gave to the combo moves, better than I could probably come up with! Take your time writing the chapters, no need to rush. Quality over quantity. Rome wasn't built in a day. Excited already for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work! |
| Joanne Frances Tiano Cajilig chapter 2 . 5/8 Oh I love this story... |
| CommanderBoss chapter 2 . 5/8 Wasn't expecting this in the dead of night but I'm happy to see this story get updated!nice work on this chapter. |
| TriskelionForever chapter 1 . 4/29 Well it seems great so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Andreina Cummings chapter 1 . 4/6 Great chapter |
| Espeon35 chapter 1 . 4/5 After reading the chapter I have to say that it's better than the original story. Like what you said before when you wrote the chapters, you made it a bit fast pace gathering a lot of pokemons and character entering and leaving. Just by reading the new story chapter, it gives an even pace and provides smooth transitions of characters coming to the scene and going out. |
| goyalaayush890 chapter 1 . 3/26 Pls update soon |
| The Golden Sentry chapter 1 . 1/10 I'm really loving this story i can't wait for more chapters :D |
| Superman90 chapter 1 . 1/8 Absolutely Amazing Chapter |
| Shadoath chapter 1 . 1/5 I wont deny, kind of sad that you're not continuing the original story, but I'm glad that you're still writing about the twins still. This is great so far. And I love that you made Ember a dark type specialist, as that's my favorite type as well, and definitely what I would specialize in as well. |
