| Reviews for A Conversation with Death |
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jinxwalnut25 chapter 1 . 6/21 This was lovely, I wish you would add more! However, keep writing nonetheless (not necessarily this one) because I love your writing style! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17 Harry is a girls name? WTF? |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25 OMG this is soooo good! |
AuroraNova46 chapter 1 . 2/13 This is so interesting. |
weirdhead chapter 1 . 1/27 Voldemort is magically powerful and knows magic more than everyone alive. Even without his horcruxes he is very powerful. How could Neville just takedown and behead Voldemort ? |
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 1/16 so where did he send her |
aromatictruth chapter 1 . 1/13 Wow I love this! Are you thinking about continuing this story? Because I would definitely read to see what happened next! |
Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 1/2 Amazing one shot. That sets up it's own AU. |
fringeperson chapter 1 . 1/1 This is brilliant in and of itself, but also a fantastic set-up for any future Harry-Insert type fics, whether they're crossovers or time/dimension travel. Thank you for writing! |
magitech chapter 1 . 1/1 Well Harry choosing rebirth instead of going back to the hell that was her life is different. Always makes me wonder where this fighting ability and determination was before Harry died? My theory is when Harry was there to do the fighting for them, the 'great' witches and wizards of Magical Britain were content to hide under their beds while impatiently waiting for Harry to do the dirty work for them. |
Pri-Chan 1410 chapter 1 . 1/1 Loved it! Merry Christmas, Happy New Year and Happy Birthday! xD |
notYacob chapter 1 . 1/1 This wouldn't be a bad start to a reincarnation au/crossover fic. This one shot may be a bit short to really get a grasp of the characters, but your death didn't feel too contrived or cliche like some others I've seen. I think if you could manage to keep it from feeling contrived, your version of death might be a decent recurring character if used carefully. I like the galaxy eye and smoke imagery. I also enjoyed your depiction of fem!Harry. Her actions felt in character for what I've come to expect from reading way too much fanfiction. My only criticism would be that I think you could have been a bit more verbose. What you have here is concise and gets the point across well, but it's too short (for me) to really get into it and enjoy it. You could probably disregard that though as I read very fast and normally prefer fics of at least 10k words. |
Matsoine chapter 1 . 1/1 I loved the little plot twist you did at the very last moment ;D Amusing, you made me giggle! |
Magic Night Star Mage chapter 1 . 1/1 Now I really hope you make a sequel to this! Great job! |
tiredtypingandtea chapter 1 . 1/1 Oh that ending is such a troll move for a one-shot. But a fun one! XD |