| Reviews for The Aura Hunter Hero: Deku |
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Cheshirek3t chapter 2 . 2/21 Her 1st daughter Himiko Schnee (Formally Toga) YES! yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes yessssssssssss YEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS(*doing a loop-de-loop*) You beautiful human you [Everyone liked that] |
Jlargent chapter 3 . 2/18 So, a thought occurred to me: Do you think it's possible for Momo to create Dust Crystals with her Creation Quirk and thus giving them an edge? I mean Izuku could create gemstones with his and that could be used for his weapons giving them an additional edge. |
MIKE202303 chapter 3 . 2/17 Nice work I look forward to more |
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 3 . 2/17 KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK! COOL! IZUKU GOT A GEM TRANSMUTION SEMBLANCE; and already has access to BOTH Blackwhip AND Float; I'm Assuming that once any Future Quirks from previous OFA Recipients awaken; they'll be added to this story. . . I Can hardly wait to see more! |
Some bloke chapter 1 . 2/2 ok you Teem RWBY can't be heros because they dont have Quriks. What thats stuped firstly all there sembalicnes are beter thaan most of class 1-A's second Izuku aplid to be a hero without a quirk and they let him. |
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 2 . 1/31 KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK! COOL! I Can hardly wait to see How Izuku's Green Aura is able to be used in Tandom with OFA. . . |
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 1 . 1/31 KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK! I CAN HARDLY WAIT TO SEE WHAT IZUKU CAN DO WITH AURA; DOES HE HAVE A SEMBLANCE NOW?! |
itsyaboiiii chapter 2 . 1/30 Much too many one night stands for team RWBY and it felt unnecessary for them to have so many children, I am intersested on how you will integrate the children in the story though. In future chapters i hope that the story doesn't deviate too much from the story instead of focusing on the OCs |
MIKE202303 chapter 2 . 1/30 Nice |
adislt chapter 2 . 1/29 okay i can see the reason but it still feel forced, first have joint toe or not isn't absolute evidence of quirck , second the police will not just use quirck suppression juat because thy use their quirck in fact it will far more trouble to list them as quirckless as yang semblance is kind passive and there's no way with their personality except weiss can stand still to not use their semblance, politically and tactically it will be far safer for them to be allowed to use their semblance as quirck and it's not mentioned passive properties of aura, how they can explain their regeneration and shield lower granted by aura and finally by your reason izuku absolutely should not get aura as he will also fall into the problem you mentioned about why you make rwby sans blake quirckless in paper |
Sageofchaos chapter 1 . 1/6 hope to read more. |
Boloipi chapter 1 . 1/5 I think the story is ok, but please, keep the commas in mind. |
Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 1/2 interesting though you forget they could pass their semblances off as quirks |
Foxsky Harem Emperor 2015 chapter 1 . 1/2 why not keep them all some of us really like you hard work plus not one like to see these being remove |
adislt chapter 1 . 1/2 there's one very big plothole that i see in this fic, and that is status of quirckless for Weiss, Yang, and Ruby , did you forget that quirck essentially is very similar to semblance in remnant ? and none of the rwby member don't have semblance that can be disguised as quirks rubysuoer speed bursther semblance can make her very fast suddenly but have very little control of it after activation yangher semblance literally can be disguised as quirck weissbit tricky as without dust her semblance become very limited and she still unable to fully activated her summoning rune ability but still it can be disguised as quirk. |