Reviews for Vertigo
AsketronNidavellir8 chapter 2 . 7/22
AAAHH I'm crying so bad right now, when Petey is babbling at Tony, desperately asking him not to make him go back, oh my poor childdd
AsketronNidavellir8 chapter 1 . 6/7
Bravo, Bravo, Lodestar! Once again you make me cry and laugh and make an overall great story full of emotion. Poor Petey!
shewriteswords chapter 2 . 4/30
This made me actually cry. And I never cry. What have you done. Going to check out the next story now.
awriterhiding chapter 1 . 4/24
Wow. Just... wow. Incredible story, characters were real and touching. The scene with Flash wanting to help was amazing... just beautiful. This is top-notch work. Carry on, fellow pen-wielder!
Raven White Fox chapter 1 . 3/20
I had multiple tears in my eyes just from one chapter. Well Done. Loved it.
AnimeLime chapter 1 . 2/6
I- I can't... this is so hard for me to read... I literally cried reading this... it's kinda how I feel. Like all of a sudden Mom starts talking to her boyfriend... I feel like she's- she's moving away emotionally...
SpiderFanWrites chapter 1 . 2/3
I love how Flash was being so nice! We definitely need more Flash Peter commutes. Like Peter spills what happened at M&M and Flash understands because his parents never pay attention to him either.

I read the sequel before this ._.

Please write the third chapter(?) soon!
catastrophiqu chapter 1 . 2/2
thank you for making me cry at two in the morning.
BUT for people wondering yes or no to read this it's a yes
I rarely cry over fanfics but this... This deserves an award
anonymousfriend27 chapter 2 . 2/2
I have never felt more hatred for a fictional character. The feels
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
Great story, am excited to possibly see more!
TheNecromancer0 chapter 1 . 1/16
damn... You captured that feeling so well... I can't actually say what feeling but I feel understood by that and holy shit, having your thoughts laid bare is kinda... Nice? with that resolution.
AllAboutFanfiction chapter 1 . 1/13
My heart can’t take this...your writing is amazing and connects to readers emotions as they read. Keep up the good work.
shirozi chapter 1 . 1/11
Holy shit, I almost cried. I sincerely hope you make a sequel, because goddamn this Peter needs some love. Amazing fic though, I love the world building you did, and you fleshed this out so well. Thanks for posting, I really enjoyed it!
drainednerves chapter 1 . 1/6
I hate this so much. I cannot stop crying, it's ridiculously well and realistically written and my heart aches. Gosh, poor Peter. I cannot put into words how bad this makes me feel. Just to clarify, though: Grest writing, great concept, great execution. Incredibly well done.
If you'll excuse me, I will go and cry myself to sleep now.
Redfoxshadow chapter 1 . 1/6
That was so fantastic! Great writing and I loved the plot. I'd loved to see the sequel to this, but it alone was so good!
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