"Just the confusion of a man who thinks he has given up his foolish ideals, only to cling to them more tightly than ever."

-This is probably my most favourite quote. It sums up EMIYA beautifully.

Me: Wait...Kiara Lily is actually canon?

TungstenCat: (Points gun) Always has been...

This is lovely.

So... Kiara Lily is something I didn't realise I needed to see, until I found this.

She's so sweet and earnest, so unlike her adult self, she needs love and care. Really hoping you do more Kiara Lily at some point.

If you do, please don't let her get drawn in by her adult self. If anything, Caster Kiara Lily could serve as a gateway to a redemption arc for Alter-Ego Kiara. After all, she is trying to be a better, more restrained person for the protagonist already.

Damn this was good.

Please, please tell me you plan to write more in this continuity. I'm very fascinated.

At the very least, I can't help but see a vision of young Kiara giving her elder self a lecture while both EMIYAs are watching from around the corners. Possibly laughing in one case.

Also, what's EMIYA's past with her, I know Alter's of course. Is his reaction because of Beast III or did he kill her in his timeline too?

WE need more of this.

Awesome story. I love Kiara Lily. Super sweet and wholesome.

Noone is born without the capability of being good. For some the struggle is harder than most. But in the end, all that shapes us are our choices, and the opportunity, and difficulties, life puts in out way. Would a saint be a sinner, a murderer a savior, if their pasts were reversed. All we can do is make sure to help those we see before us, and guide them on the righteous path, even if we do not believe the end will be pleasant.

Kiara has already taken you. I'm sorry, but only an honest death can cure you now.

Well this was cute overall, I enjoyed the ending even if I do feel really sorry for EMIYA Alter for having to deal with normal Kiara

I wonder what Kiara really thinks when she sees her younger self. What does she feel? Hatred? Sorrow? Longing?

Cant wait for more keep up the awesome work:)

Awwww. This was really sweet to witness :3. Kiara Lily calling Emiya her Shishou is very cute -

I certainly can't complain about your newfound obsession with Kiara. You've written some good stuff for her. Though I do hope that poor Shirou gets his redemption with getting it on with Kiara sometime in the future. I felt bad with how his first attempt went (ironically I felt kinda bad for Kiara too lol). I was also very impressed with what you did for Tamamo Cat. Fluff is always nice -. I'd be very intrigued to see who you took a shot at next.

Keep it up! (so much for you getting help for the Kiara Sickness :3)

Buena historia
Espero que haya más en un futuro
(Good story
I hope there is more in the future)