Reviews for Nico Betrayed
DarkPercy chapter 13 . 7/20
Please update! this is such a good book, and I am craving for another chapter to read from this!
DarkPercy chapter 12 . 7/20
Gred and Forge? Good one, I almost missed it
Hello chapter 13 . 6/28
Okay, but I'm Still Standing by Elton John reminds me a lot of this fanfic. I absolutely love your writing style! It's really interesting how Tartarus can go into dreams! (Maybe because Nico is a son of Hades so he'd see the true nature of it?) I haven't seen a lot of fics that put of spotlight on the Weasley Twins and I'm really enjoying it. (Stolls brothers aren't twins though, btw.) I love the fic, keep writing!
NO chapter 1 . 6/17
NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEE!
NNNNNNOOOOOOPPPPPPEEEEEE!
NNNOOOPPPEEE!
NOPE!
NO!
Non-eye-mouse chapter 13 . 6/17
Oh foo,
Chapter 13 is all code.
It looks like you will have to re-post to fix it.
InsertRandomUncreativeNameHere chapter 13 . 6/16
I like the chapter, but it's kind of in code. I think whatever you uploaded isn't compatible with FanFiction.
Tayyiba13 chapter 13 . 6/16
There's a lot of code on this chapter... did you copy cut paste it from somewhere and not use clear formatting?
LunaLovegood48 chapter 12 . 5/29
This is one of my favourite stories, it is absolutely amazing! please can you update soon?
Random Person chapter 3 . 5/25
At this point you might as wel just make him a god...not immediately, but like Hercules when he died.
Random Person chapter 1 . 5/25
Holy crap Nico's OP now. I almost feel sorry for old Moldy Shorts.
weirdhead chapter 8 . 5/26
Seriously? Drarry again? I thought it would be Draco and Nico, names rhyme, blonde-brunette and all stuff.
weirdhead chapter 5 . 5/26
We want our big boy Nico powerful, hell yeah, but aren’t those blessings too much? Oh I think I understood, a brewing battle between Tartarus and Olympians?
weirdhead chapter 1 . 5/26
I'm reading this story for the first time. And I think Artemis owed her blessing to Nico because she took Bianca away from him, if not she died in desert, its inevitable to her to leave Nico. I see Bianca as an anti hero, betrayed her brother for a fake immortality and a so called *family* which will take care of you unless you broke the rules, you must listen to the head of *family* no matter what; then sad about it, took a statue, and died a hero. Artemis owes more than a blessing to him.

As a demigod, Nico should be more magic resistant than Hagrid, speeder and stronger than any mortal wizard. He can easily surpass Dumbledore with raw power unless Dumbledore is a demigod too.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/6
I just want you to know I really enjoy this story :) I have hopes it will continue, but if you don’t feel up to it, it’s your story to end. No pressure from here. But if you do continue this story I will be reading it ・ᴗ・
Tayyiba13 chapter 10 . 5/4
Loved it! Keep going.
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