This is seriously amazing! I can't wait to read the next chapter. well done!

wow this is amazing!

wow I love this! great chapter! I hope wedge doesn't go fully anti Luke. I get he must be confused and even have to report it, but I hope he does it in a way where to shows he trusts him and thinks Vader is manipulating it.

Oh, poor Luke! I hope he'll be able to resist the pull of the Dark Side. Although considering Yoda's words at the end, I have a feeling the nexus in the Force wasn't Luke succombing to the Dark Side, but rather Vader opening up somewhat to the Light.
Either way, this story gets even more interesting with each passing chapter. Can't wait to read the next installment!

Don't give up hope Luke.

Wow

Wow

This is very good!

Finally got around to finishing this chapter, and oh my god, I can't wait for more. Incredibly intense, and such overwhelming stakes!

Wow. You need to continue this.

Oh I like this. Thanks for sharing!
I'm sorry about your sister. I hope you are doing okay

Eek, I didn’t know you were writing again/still...yay! Gut wrenching, painful. Love the idea that others were questioning Luke’s commitment and sorcery after Bespin. Wondering if Vader is also intentionally not allowing Luke’s burns to be treated...like father, like son, they’re both maimed. Nice to see Wedge again. Brilliant story, so many undertones.

Very interesting start to the story. I love the way you write the characters, they are the people we know but with added depth. Poor Luke, even when he sacrifices himself for others, they don't always appreciate it. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Poor Luke, I wish Wedge could see it is not his fault he is related to Vader.

Wow amazing story.