Reviews for Equinox
Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 18 . 7/7
This chapter was freaking awesome!
Please make more soon!
And add more Lemons!
The Book of Eli chapter 18 . 7/3
A nice sweet ending that is open enough that if you want to write a small adventure you can. Still loved how you handled the final battle and can't wait to see what else you have in mind thanks!
Mystery Man chapter 18 . 7/2
Great story, glad Star got her comeuppance, after being such a brat and betraying the group to send the world to apocalypse.
IrishKatana chapter 18 . 7/3
Huh I was half expecting Star would realize that the whole darkness thing was evil and was just using her
kirbymaster800 chapter 18 . 7/2
Awesome chapter dude!
0zeroomegaouroboros chapter 18 . 7/2
will there be a sequel to this story i hope so.
The Book of Eli chapter 17 . 6/27
Oh boy looks like things are going to get crazier...
kirbymaster800 chapter 17 . 6/27
Awesome chapter, we're now in endgame now.
The Book of Eli chapter 16 . 6/23
Oh this war is going to have a few twsits and a great deal of fun to come...
kirbymaster800 chapter 16 . 6/22
Great chapter, keep up the great work
The Book of Eli chapter 15 . 6/16
I get the feeling Metaora will keep her promise to kill Star. Also I have the sinking feeling Eclipsa will get her wish and good on you Adamn you got the girl. Now go save the world...
kirbymaster800 chapter 15 . 6/16
Amazing chapter bro!
Linkonpark100 chapter 15 . 6/15
And there it is. This is the very deconstruction that was bound to happen. You’d expect character development, but nobody can change on a whim.

On the other hand, it’s good to see the first of the harem.
kirbymaster800 chapter 14 . 6/13
Star, you traitorous cunt!
Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 14 . 6/10
ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME?!

GODDAMNIT MAN!
STOP KILLING US WITH CLIFFHANGERS!

YOU HAD BETTER UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON OR SO HELP ME I’LL BLAST YOU TO KINGDOM COME
(Not really but i need this freaking story so flippin bad)
Otherwise the chapter was freaking awesome
Also put lemons
And last thing...
WHY IS STAR SUCH A BAD PERSON IN THIS?!
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