| Reviews for A new ending to my story |
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   traceybuie chapter 2 . 7/9 This whole scenario is how I picture everyone in the Cullen family would react to Bella' new bo. Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
| traceybuie chapter 1 . 7/9 I love how Bell and Garrett traveled together for so long and got to know each other. Peter and Charlotte being friendly and getting along with them was a bonus. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
| LadyViolet2112 chapter 1 . 6/12 Fantastic story! It's cool that you didn't make everything so cookie cutter., so neat. Thanks for sharing |
| keraatchley19891 chapter 2 . 5/31 Great |
| keraatchley19891 chapter 1 . 5/31 Loved it! |
| Robin.D chapter 2 . 5/3 That was a really good story :-) :-) |
| Elisabeth123 chapter 2 . 5/3 Ewwww why Tanya and so quickly and with his daughter there! Uggggh! |
| Robin.D chapter 1 . 5/1 That was good I loved it :‑X :-):-):,-):,-) |
| Charlie0925 chapter 2 . 2/5 Great writing here hon! ;o) |
| redrose1319 chapter 2 . 2/4 Please up date son I check every day to see if you have continued this story. ️ |
| lola-cullen-salvatore chapter 2 . 1/26 I wish this was longer. Love the story |
| Bell 1 chapter 2 . 1/26 Some of the same comments as I had with the previous chapter, but there was a bit more dialogue this time. :) It would be nice to learn about the baby's sex and see if Carlisle was wrong. ;) It would also be nice to see where they all actually go from here. Do Garrett and Bella end up getting married? Will they stay with the family? Will Garrett want that after their "trial"? Will they spend time both with family and traveling? They could travel once every few months for about six weeks and return home. Will the family ever move? And if they do, will Jacob get the brass to go with them, or will he stay on the reservation? Will that make Renesmee happy, or upset her if he decides they must stay? How will Bella handle it if she has to be away from her little girl and grand baby for long stretches of time (possibly years) after they move? I am thankful Edward seems to be accepting the new structure of his relationship with Bella. I still want more Garrett and Bella... their learning about each other now that they are with the family again... their getting to know each other better in a more steady life (not travelling so much)... how Garrett handles being in one place for an extended time. There are so many things to learn yet from these two. |
| Tee Hill chapter 2 . 1/23 Nice |
| sarae32 chapter 2 . 1/22 Such a great story. I love Bella and Garrett together. Wish the story would |
| asia.joanna.7334 chapter 2 . 1/20 Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it. That story is ameizing. Another great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. Please update soon |
