Love it! The tortured Ben needs Rey to balance out his darkness. It was beautiful ️

This was really sweet.

Wow! Your words stole my breath away just it surely did Ben's. I watched the film with my brother as he is a big fan of the francise and knowing how talented you are, I couldn't resist logging in here for the first time in a long while to read your version of an ending. I like this better than the real one as I had a soft spot for Ben at times during the film and saddened that he never had the chance you have given him. I can feel his anguish and guilt pouring out of his soul throughout your story and Rey's gentle but sure actions to ease his suffering. Well done!

Liked it

Aw, this was adorable! Thank you so much for the lovely vignette. The writing was so sweet.

Not gonna lie, when Ray said. “Maybe I can help” I thought things were about to get a bit naughty! This was very sweet and well written! Thank you for sharing with us!

I HATE Reylo, but that doesn't mean that I can't appreciate the effort that went into this story and how much you clearly care about the characters.

Great balance

Loved this so so much. Thank you for writing it.

awww just aawwww that was too cute i loved it

This was a really wholesome story! I loved the way you captured Ben's inner torment and his struggle with accepting the emotional consequences of his actions. I would love to see an update or a follow up story!

Aaahhh so beautiful! I wished that the movie had finished like this! Thank you!

Sweet and short great job!

I enjoyed this. I like when they work together and Ben is vulnerable enough to let her in.