Could you write a whole series without the lemon part but more romance so at the end their is a lemon

Usually I skim over smut fics since there's not a lot to criticize or praise, but I saw that in comparison to other smut fics, it had a plot so I was intrigued. Figured it deserved a review!

While I understand that it's really a side property, I kinda liked the interactions between them. It was nice to see that despite all of the screwing and the sucking between Victor and Marnie, there was a bond development even if the span was just four chapters; it's not like they were screwing each other just for the sake of screwing one another you know? There's a decent romantic connection to back their intimacy.

For an author who's focused more on sex scenes than story plot throughout their past fics, you did a decent job! You ought to do more of these if you can: merging a short plot into a smut fic. It sure is a lot more interesting to see a pair develop on the side even if most readers just come on this to see them fuck.

Oh yeah, and your sex scenes were top-notch as usual, Thirst. Just wanted to throw that out lol.

Great story all the way to the end! Now, maybe you should try a harem story for Victor next.

You could remove the smut and this would still be a great romance story. Of course, the sex scenes just make it all the better.

Great chapter! :)

Nice! Hopefully, there's more after that.

Your stories are good I hope the following and if you can make some stories the first story of Pokemon with the trio with Ash-May-Serena and the second story but of Digimon with the trio of Tai-Mimi-Kari please.

Great story!

Nicely done, congrats!

Why not adding a 2nd chapter with a threesome Victor/Marnie/Hop ?

New story, yay

Nice! I love fics that do a good job segueing in sex during the main story in a way that feels natural. All while keeping everyone in-character, too! Good job!

Any chance you might do another one with them later when they catch up in her hometown?