Reviews for SoulMarked
GreatBigBookofEverything chapter 19 . 7/30
I was rereading this story the other day and relaising how much I missed it. Thank you for updating this story is still as perfect as I remember and the chapter is too. I hope everything is going well for you.
Lottielue1 chapter 19 . 7/30
I've been waiting patiently for this update, not only do I love that you added my suggestion into it too. Glad to see Harry and Cassie beginning to open up more and relax around each other a bit. Look forward to the next chapter :)
HistoryISculture chapter 19 . 7/30
Interesting. Update soon please
amrawo chapter 19 . 7/30
Great chapter! I can’t wait to read more!
SixOnTheSide chapter 18 . 7/14
Is this story dead? I hope this story is not dead.
Kim chapter 18 . 5/15
I'm still so in love with the story and where it's going. I love the idea of interaction. If I can think of anything, Ill come back and add it. You've just done such a lovely job so far. Hope for an update soon. Hope you and your husband (and any family) are well.
Mixie18 chapter 18 . 4/26
This is really good! I can’t wait for the next one
amrawo chapter 18 . 4/25
I love this story so far! I can’t wait to read more! Update soon!
Kaanae chapter 18 . 4/23
Amazing story! I can't wait to see what you can come up with next. I love Harry and Cassie's relationship!
Lady of Trolls chapter 18 . 4/15
its me but my device logged me out and the browser wont let me log back in. I have an idea for Harry andCassie.

There is also a scene to go with it. The scene shows more of cassies mischievous side. Basically Harry and Cassie have just gotten in trouble and they re now hiding from the trouble. To pass the time they start flirting.
Harry, yer a cheeky kitty arent ye.
Cassie, thank you loyal pirate.
Harry, love that wasnae a compliment.
Cassie, well then i retract my compliment.
Harry, But love. (hes whining)
Cassie, Fine. You are still my loyal pirate.
Harry, And your my cheeky kitty.

Ive seen the mashup. Its really good I also like the zombies and descendants mashups.
Belle chapter 18 . 4/14
Sorry I can't do dialogue unless it's in a block sorry again.
INTERACTION DIALOGUE SUGGESTION:
Maddy giggled. "You liiiike her. I don't think she likes you though."
Harry stopped. Ignoring her hadn't worked, and now she had pinned him right in the heart. "Oh, I think she more than likes me." He tried to sound nonchalant, but his voice trembled slightly.
"No, she doesn't." A hard edge developed in Maddy's voice while somehow still bearing whimsy. "No one could like a sadistic, murdering, vile, BROKEN boy. You're just her soulmate. A funny little toy to flirt with and watch as her self-image flowers into your skin."
Harry swallowed. "I don't have to listen to this. I WILL find Cassie."
Maddy tipped off the table and landed with a bone-cracking CRASH in the floor. "Look for her all you like. You won't find her. I even wrote a song about it, want to hear?"
"No."
"Ca-a-ssie is mi-i-ine, Ca-a-ssie is mi-i-ine, forever and ever and ever and ever and..."
Hook pushed his way through the doors and made for the staircase instead of his room. Maddy's song chased him down the steps and through the hall. "Charming little ditty" he thought to himself, and hastened to find Cassie and escape before Maddy realized he wasn't in the next room.
Shook chapter 18 . 4/14
I can't believe I'm so late to the party but I remember reading here kitty kitty and this is amazing! I was honestly brought to tears by how tender harry is to Cassie like idk if it's the isolation but it really be hitting different.

Beautiful writing!
Heaven's Mistake chapter 18 . 4/14
I have the perfect quote to describe MaddyMy love is like a candle- if you forget about me, I will burn your fucking house down."

This was a more feelsy chapter, and I honestly love it. I get the feeling I would be just like Cassie if put in that situation. Also, I'm in love with the fact that Harry called her stunning and he immediately got another soulmark. That had me grinning like an idiot.

INTERACTION DIALOGUE SUGGESTIONSI don't need to flirt, I will seduce you with my awkwardness."

"Don't make a girl a promise if you know you can't keep it."

"what would you do if you weren't afraid?"
Lottielue1 chapter 18 . 4/14
You brought a smile to my face when I saw you had updated and it was such a lovely chapter too, I just love Hassie it's great.

With regards to the quote maybe something to do with the worst soulmark "murderer"
the Conversation could go something like...
("Hook?"
"Yeah Kitty Cat"
"There's one soul mark, there's one that's bad but it's different from the others?"
"Oh yeah..." Cassie nods, "what's it say?"
"Murderer")
and depending on how your version of Harry is if he's not a murderer it could fade away when she learns the truth or if he is one it could be a twist in the story... but that's just a brief idea of what I was thinking.
Or
I'd love a moment where they are talking about being free of the Island and Harry talks about sailing away and she could asks him if he'd never take her to Wonderland and he promises her that if they get they off the Isle then he would, though this would work once they've gotten closer.

Anyway I look forward to your next chapter please update soon as you can!
HistoryISculture chapter 18 . 4/14
Oh my god. I love this chapter so much. More soon please. I'm so excited
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