poor Leia she got ignored for the ghost of Luke. Vader is very close to explode with Padme , he will not be patient anymore

Well that didn't end well.

yes Vader explode

the twist is luke is dead

poor padme

Rely on drugs to find some nomality in marriage? POOR VADERDALA~ I started to wonder if ep3 is less depressive than this

Aw, poor Padme... and poor Han! My goodness, that's going to be a family dinner to remember. Even Leia's getting the short end of the stick here. All she wanted was a normal dinner with her boyfriend...

I'm excited to see what Padme has to say to Vader! Thanks for the update :)

Interesting.

Oh my goodness, you updated! I'm so happy :) Wow, that last plot twist hit me like a punch to the gut. So much makes sense now, especially Luke supporting Padme when she stops taking her medications. Props to you, that was amazing!

If I could offer one piece of constructive criticism- I'd recommend using a single line break in between lines of dialogue, instead of a double line break. (You can do this by holding the shift key while pressing enter, instead of just pressing the enter key.) I think this would help segment the story into more organized paragraphs. For example:

"Dialogue, dialogue."
"Dialogue, dialogue."

New paragraph, "dialogue, dialogue."
"Dialogue, dialogue."

Thanks for updating! I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Vader needs to understand that his family is breaking apart because of his dark actions.

poor padme reality hurts

LUKE IS DEAD. I TOLD YOU ALL. WHY ARE YOU ACTING SURPRISED?

Holy shit

LUKE IS ACTUALLY DEAD IN THE STORY. PADME IS OFF HER PILLS SO SHE'S IMAGINING HIM. THAT'S THE TWIST.

LUKE IS DEAD IN THIS STORY. PADME IS OFF HER PILLS SO SHE'S IMAGINING HIM. THAT'S THE TWIST.