| Reviews for You Fear Death And Darkness? I Fear The Unknown (Part 2 of 3) |
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Grovek26 chapter 11 . 6/11 Excellent story so far. The only thing that concerns me when reading this, and part one, are the inconsistencies. For example, the dash to the ministry in part one didn't include Umbridge at all. She was fired for abusing her position. In this story, Hermione handed her over to the centaur, and when she was retrieved, was incapable of continuing. |
BratGirl1983 chapter 11 . 6/1 I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update |
jadegribouille chapter 11 . 5/31 hello, i just finished the first part in one day (ONE DAY !) and oh my god, it was so great ! i think i'm in love with your fic, definitely in my top 3 i guess damn, i want to know the rest of the story so hard ! just, thank you for this amazing story ... the plot is incredible, your writing is fluid and light, very pleasant while reading, and your characters ... i want them as my friends, can i ? they react exactly the way i'd expexted them to and it's just so freaking impressive, how you manage to enter in the characters' skins to make them sound and look real ... just woah also, i was wondering if you would allow me to translate your fic in french so that french speakers would be able to discover this wonderful story. i hope you and your family are feeling good and safe during this difficult period we're going through can't wait to read the restplease, stay safe, jade. |
General Mac chapter 11 . 5/17 ooohhh thanks love it, stay safe |
Lucyole chapter 11 . 5/15 Really good that will be a talk for Severus for sure he may will find a solution much faster than Hermione or Harry even before Dumbledore shows Harry the altered memorie from Slughorn I'm sure he can help them better. More please that would be great * |
Smootsmokey chapter 11 . 5/15 Great |
General Mac chapter 10 . 4/28 Broiliian thanks love it, stay safe. |
Smootsmokey chapter 10 . 4/24 Great |
wiccagirl-2005 chapter 10 . 4/23 Great chapter. Can't wait to read more so as always keep it coming |
Lucyole chapter 10 . 4/23 A nice chapter and Draco has a sweet lover that's good for him, Severus can't get enough of Hermione and vice versa. More please that would be great *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Oceans Night chapter 9 . 4/10 I spent all day yesterday reading part one and now got through part 2, I love your writung style, and how well you connect emotions to the story. I cant wasit to see how part 2 plays out. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter |
General Mac chapter 9 . 4/2 Brilliant thanks, stay safe and well. |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/30 Complimenti, speravo davvero che fosse incinta peccato. Spero che nonostante il suo patronus sia cambiato gli altri non si facciano influenzare da questo. |
Lucyole chapter 9 . 3/31 Really good chapter poor Hermione but Severus trys to comfort her that's sweet, some people are stupid really wonder who will stand by her side. More please that would be great *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
RhodaBush chapter 9 . 3/31 More soon please Stay safe |