mmmm, go, it seems that Detective Nick has already begun to think about her but I feel that she still needs to think more deeply after all Adalind was just a puppet to keep the key for Renard, always and thought that they treat her as if she had It all started when he just followed orders from the man he loved, who was a goddamn who threw it away when it no longer served him. Sometimes I wonder if Nick didn't think about it about Renard using Adalind for his plans and that if it wasn't for him, she would not have approached and would not have had problems, she would have lived a happy life with the woman who rejected her marriage proposal, instead of walking with a beautiful girl whose only defect was to be fooled by a false love

Nick's thoughts before the Beautiful Hexenbiest, although I feel that he lacked to show some pain, not being considered the father, not to mention him if he liked the cake ... it would have been good to see him feel upset about that, but good to have to pass

Loved it... love that you are changing the storyline to see what would happened if Nick was warned before he lost everything he held dear... hope you update soon...

que bien así que el Grimm ya se empezo a poner en el lugar de Adalind con relacion a lo de que hacer si alguien pusiera en peligro a su sangre, bueno del odio al amor solo hay un paso ya conociste lo peor de ella ahora conoce su lado suave y amable ese que solo veian sus abuelos de niña, es una lastima que siempre la critiquen a ella en la serie por lo menos ya en la tenporad se nota de lo que es capaz de hacer por sus hijos, los pone primero que a un hombre a un si se esta muriendo en vez de decirle a Nick te amos sus ultimas palabras fueron proteje a Kelly y Diana
that good so that the Grimm already began to put in the place of Adalind in relation to what to do if someone endangered his blood, good hatred of love there is only one step you already knew the worst of her now knows her soft and kind side that only her grandparents saw as a child, it is a pity that they always criticize her in the series at least already in the 5th and 6th note you can see what she is capable of doing for her children, she puts them first of all, if a man is dying instead of telling Nick we love you, his last words were protect Kelly and Diana

bien acabo de leer los 3 capitulos se ve genial la historia y mas que Adalind me encanta, la verdad en la serie se la train mas contra ella que contra el verdadero malo, pero eso es la unica que llamo la atencion de 3 (4) hombres Renard, Nick y Meizer (4to si contamos al principe hermabo de Renard) pero aun asi ella en realidad solo queria amor se supone que las hexembest son ambiciosas al poder pero Adalind no ella siemñre fue exitosa por si misma, solo queria amor de verdad con relacion a Nick,
Well, I just read the 3 chapters, the story looks great and more than I love Adalind, the truth in the series is the train more against it than against the real bad guy, but that's the only one that caught the attention of 3 (4) men Renard, Nick and Meizer (4th if we tell the prince Hermabo of Renard) but even so she really just wanted love the hexembest is supposed to be ambitious to power but Adalind not she was always successful in itself, just wanted real love in relation to Nick, well at least he is already thinking that aria would be in her shoes, even with the father's permission you did not say anything to the mother affinity is a kidnapping and that is the police never showed regret to what he did only hate adalind more only until he faced Renard showed that he regrets having done it and criticized him about his reasoning towards his daughter for agreeing to move her away and leave her with someone she doesn't know (Nick's mother) there is only the realized what he did

if it is normal a father does crazy things for his children and nas to protect them from whoever the love of the parents has no limits

hopefully and when you stop kelly you make a chapter where everyone who stole from Daiana see her as a good mother and feel pain for having snatched a mother her daughter and a baby drinks her mother's love, including Nick because they really deserve to see that they made a mistake

They always blame Adalind for everything when she is also a victim of Renard ah but well that they do nothing to him when he is the one who betrays them most and again at least adalind would open them if they had not separated her Of her baby, Juliett would not be hexembest, Nick would be with her, she would not have Kelly, and no one would be threatening them now, using Juliette or looking for her mother to have the baby, or how things are.

Very interesting. Please keep going!

I like your story. Tanks !

it looks interesting I hope it continues soon is another point of view too many others criticized her that she would be a bad mother just because she was a bad dial person and after all she was only used in reality she was not a bad person and yet they just tried it as most cruel when it was Renard who planned everything and not her