| Reviews for It's The Sudden Stop That'll Kill You |
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   MetalKyria chapter 4 . 4/16 I enjoyed this story very much ,Thank you |
| Linda Parton chapter 4 . 1/22 wow an exciting chapter- good story Tim |
| Linda Parton chapter 3 . 1/22 the story is awesome, I just feel so bad for Walter and his pain |
| Linda Parton chapter 2 . 1/22 well here we go again another exciting story |
| Linda Parton chapter 1 . 1/22 good story |
| Marie chapter 4 . 1/1 Really great story Thank you for your work |
| chppics chapter 4 . 1/1 Nice adventure. I guess that's the question the series couldn't answer is how would Toby react when he found out Happy was married. I know how I would feel. All we both know is Toby is the only soulmate to vise versa. I really liked how the fic jumped forward and backward. It really worked. Can't wait for the next one.. |
| franxine bobo chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 it is a total pleasure to read what you have written and i love the day by day updates it gives mr something to look forward to everyday, you are a blessing and i thank the powers that be for creating you i love the way you portray walter and paige i love how you got rid of collins, i really love how toby was put in his place by happy and paige but ralph was the best. |
| Franxine bobo chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 Tim you are such a good writer and I just love the daily upgrades and you bring the characters alive I see Walter and Paige as two people completely opposite of elyes and Katherine I have never mixed them into the characters of paige and walter they have a life all by themselves. Thanks for writing so good. |
| Marti chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 Great story! Loved it. |
| Pennye chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 Your devotion to loyalty in the Scorpion team is just wonderful. Wish the Scorpion writers had had the same devotion! Thank you! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2019 Lovely ending and pleased to see Happy and Toby more true to their characters. Would love some more stories of alternative episodes or I really enjoy reading stories of peoples perception of what happens following an episode (not 4.22 though!) Great writing and sorry to hear of your wife's troubles. |
| Margaret Gautier chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 Excellent closure to season 3. Your stories, make CBS writters look like their stories was 1st grade composition. You win the Emmy for best screen writer of the year. Take car of yourself, you have a lot on your plate. Prayers are with you and your wife. She comes first, your fans will wait. |
| Lucy Conan chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 Lovely conclusion to this season 3 AU! Really enjoyed it! And Richard really lays it on when he feels guilty... |
| franxine bobo chapter 3 . 12/30/2019 i was reading the reviews and someone said your wife had a relasp or something i an so sorry that she is going through so much but god will help so keep your chin up and eyes to the lord and things will fall in place |
