LOVE the first chapter

it was good story but not that great. You skip many important scene and that will make many reader confuse for them who never watch the anime and although i already watch the anime still this was fanfiction and i I wish there will different on some part than the anime but it seems I was too hopeful

nice story. please continue this.

I always liked the character of Shinsou and I'm glad you wrote a story about him, apart you think add a couple?

And so the plot thickens

Keep it up, I'm burning with soooo many questions!

I'm a little excited to see how Eri will interact with everyone. It's also really funny that Shinso is their plan A.

It's a solid idea, but you're moving way too fast with the plot. Dial it back a couple of notches and let Shinso properly react to his situation rather than act like a prop piece.

Triggered Kurogiri?

Well the easiest thing for you to is have Shinso continue down the rabbit hole and get even more attention, then do something pretty stupid and land himself in the same position as Natsume. Perhaps having a very young Eri show up next would be a good idea?

You've got a good setup going. Can't wait to see Shinso's interactions with the special class, I can already see him getting into trouble with that big sarcastic mouth of his.

omg you need to add the other main characters! I want izuku and mikan to meet each other! and todoroki and natsume? that would be interesting! ga is SO similar to my hero academia! you should definitely include the other characters some how getting there! or vice versa!

Yeah. I really do like it. I do feel that a little restriction should be put on Shinso if he keeps brainwashing everyone though, because after a certain point the principal is going to take an interest in his power.