Reviews for Going On Instinct
shadewatcher chapter 2 . 7/28
Duh duhh dun! Oooh I soo hope that Harry's lawyer can get justice for even part of what poor Harry has been through. Hope to see more chapters!
GenieM chapter 2 . 7/14
Very good start! I would like to see more of it! The healer should really check the scar. Wouldn't they have found it if they gave Harry a full diagnosis?
SkylerHollow chapter 2 . 7/6
So far looks like a fun story, looking forward to the always satisfying comeuppance. One small detail flaw I noticed is Nicholas couldn't be 23 and have gone to school with Snape, he would have only been 9 when Harry was born. He would have to have been atleast 33 or more to be close to the same year. Besides that very much looking forward to more.
Mar91 chapter 2 . 7/2
A very good chapter
Elfin69 chapter 2 . 7/4
i think it is good that he is actually talking about it and finally will start to see someone to help him heal. I wonder if they will take his memories so that no one can say that he is lying again.
Beautyfangirl23 chapter 2 . 7/3
I can't wait for more
crankypants16 chapter 2 . 7/3
I like this so far. Thank you!
MoonGoddess111 chapter 2 . 7/3
it says his lawyer, nick is only 23 years old. how old is Harry and nicks son? nick is only about 10 years older than Harry?
kirsty21 chapter 2 . 7/3
cool update soon please thank you
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 7/2
I like it!
Wishfull-star chapter 2 . 7/2
That was an outstanding chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:) stay safe
randomplotbunny chapter 2 . 7/2
Harry's first year really was horribly traumatizing, even compared to the others.
666Neko chapter 2 . 7/2
thanks for the story hopefully there is more its a really good read
Calmzone1 chapter 2 . 7/2
In the excitement of reading a new book with your kids, or kids reading a new book, you just pray for things to get better for just want to keep reading because surely it must get better. When you sit and process it all after you read it, you just wonder if it really happened.

Yup.

And it gets worse. Because he knew he was consigning Harry to 10 long hard years. But it was worse. Far worse. He was just a pawn.
alix33 chapter 2 . 7/2
How much trouble is Hagrid in because of his cross-breeding those spiders? I hope at least some.
Margret Small is by no means alone in cursing the Dursleys and Dumbles. I do so too and not at all silently.
Harry would have said "heard its voice".
I hope Harry remembers all the suggestions that Nick Small makes to him (Nick just suggested that an expert on dark magic check out Harry's scar).
There are probably by now a hundred topics Nick Small should give his new client books on, not just wizards' duels.
Harry would have said "contributed to its defense".
Harry would have said "girls' bathroom" as that bathroom was never ever intended for only the use of only one girl.
Harry would have said "moving his paw off".
Harry would have said "It was hard to breathe".
Harry would have said "I lunged at him".
Harry would have thought "healer Small put a calming draught".
Another great chapter.
Thank you.
51 | Page 1 2 3 .. Last Next »