Sorry that I'm 3 days late! But Amazing chapter! I loved it all so much. Well, not the fact that Oidge was abused, of course, but I love the story so much! I'm going to beat Griffin to the ground! Can't wait to see Matt's reaction, and what happens to James.
Pleaseeeeeeee Update Soon!
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Yey! A new update!

This is really good writing!

Very good stuff, this chapter really established some great character moments, especially on Allura's end. You grasped not only her character well but everyone else's too. And seeing Pidge pull away from nearly everyone is making me very sad (I know Lance is worried but he's being stupid). But at least she has her father, Allura, and soon Matt to rely on.

Your writing in general is great and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Oh wow! That was intense. But Amazing at the same time. I loved Hunks reaction to everything tho too... Protective Hunk is the best! Can't wait for the next chapter! Pleaseeeeeeee Update Soon!
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So much going on! Can’t wait for more!

I'm really excited to see this plot develop!

This is really good so far! I’m looking forward to see how this develops.