Great chapter next please

:WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow...,...

update soon please!

We want more please author please

Update please and add Kushina in the harem to pwetty pwease..

Please continue and complete this story. It’s great and has so much potential. I’m really sad you only have one chapter written. Please write more.

This is great

Well, since it’s a harem, add Minako.

It would be fun to an overprotective/freaked-out Minato fuss over his baby girl dating an Uzumaki Bad Ass, never mind that she’ll be joining a harem. It’ll be too much manliness for the flaky blonde to handle.

And of course Jiraiya will start the Cult of Naruto

Wonderful excellent update thank for making this story

Im loving this story but i would switch mikoto with kurotsuchi and dont add kushina keep his mom or other people moms out of this. Great job

Great start.

I understand why your not going for Naru/Hina, and I completely understand.

When should we expect the next chapter?

As for your harem, why not add Isaribi to either since I see Isaribi relate to both, or Yakumo, or possibly Akari Tatsushiro.

For the maybe group: Minako, Kurotsuchi, and Hotaru.

I'm also curious what you plan for a possible summoning contract, since more than likely Minako has the toads, unless she has a different one, which would be good, since using the same idea over and over is going to be redundant.

Next chapter please.

Put karui in Naruto harem

i really like this story it is very ori. and you have done a great job of back round and backstory i hope this will be one of the storys that you write as a nice long story to read great job thanks

Cool i like this